thats so sweet

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I though you may like to know that I've revised the final chapter of this story. It is currently with my beta. If you'd like to check out the changes, you can see it in a few days. Thanks for reading! ~Sugar~

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Oh, its over. i loved it. Almost cried

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, it means alot. ~Inspiredphoenix

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Yay!!!! I love this story:) Keep up the good work and update soon!!

Author's Response: an update should be up very soon.

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It's really good! The cliff-hanger is evil, but it's still great. Hope the next chapter is a LITTLE longer...please?? *puppy dog eyes*

Author's Response: LOL thanks for the review! Yes, the next chapter is a lot longer so don't worry, will be updating soon!!

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Hurry up and update!!!!

Author's Response: I promise I'm writing as quickly as I can!

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AHHHHHHHHHHH!

Author's Response: Surprised? I was too. LOL. I won't keep you (or me) and I'll get back to writing the part V. Thanks for your review. ~InspiredPhoenix

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WOW!!!! SWEET!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will. thanks

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WOW! This is such a great story! I love it! Update soon please!

Author's Response: i will thank you!

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wow, that happened kinda fast...

Author's Response: i guess

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I think this is a really good start to the story! I cant wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it, and hope to hear from you in the future.

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Love it! There's always so much going on in the plot; I almost forgot about Draco's part in the story. It's a good thing, though, keeps it interesting:) Keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you like the complexity of the plot - I'm sure having fun creating it!

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I loved it! Update soon, please:) I really like the Draco being a nice guy thing, even if it's not really realistic. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thanks

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Oh my god, that's so sad. That song is so...disturbing for lack of a better term, but it fit the story well. I absolutely loved it, even if my eyes are all puffy and red now.

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I'm on the fence about this story. Some of it I like, but there are some parts that are really out of character or unrealistic. First of all, I doubt Ron would make Vir get an abortion, or that he would even get her pregnant in the first place. Also, I don't think Vir would apologize and they probably wouldn't be the best of friends. I thought this story was too fast and kinda a rip off of Daddy, by blondebouncingferret.

Author's Response: hey... she helped me write it!

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I loved it and I can't wait for your next story! Keep up the good work, I love your style:)

Author's Response: thanks! its already up actually! chek it out x x

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I loved it! Keep up the good work and please update soon!

Author's Response: thanks i will!!

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I loved it! One thing though, I don't think the whole Weasley family would just ignore Hermione if she looked so panicked. Keep up the good work and UPDATE soon, please!

Author's Response: yeah but she is like completely infatuated with ron... so its believeable i hope! lol anyway thnks ill update soon x x

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I loved this chapter! I understand your realization that there is life beyond fanfics, happened to me last year. Painful to go through, isn't it? Anyway, keep writing! It may not be your life, but it's a good hobby. Balance; that's the key to the hp world. Love the story!

Author's Response: I'm not just complaining that FanFics are my life though. I have personal work i am always working on too. All i do is write!!

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Loved this chapter. I would just ditch a party like that, but I'm sure they had to stay for "plot purposes." Again, loved the chapter!

Author's Response: thank you!

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Really good. I'm hoping we see some of Ron and Harry and Jadon, but I'll see right...now. Off to read the next chappie! Keep up the good work:)

Author's Response: thanks!!

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Congratulations on this story. It has an amazing plot and fantastic characterisation. I would usually just say how much I loved the story, but I felt that this particular story deserves something bigger. You have a lot of talent and it really shows in your writing style. I hope to read more of your stories soon, and I know I will read the sequel to this one immediatley. Also, I loved main idea of Harry having a twin; it's a very interesting concept. I really enjoyed reading this story, and I'm pleased to say this si definetly on my favourites list.

Author's Response: OMG, thank you!!

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I just started this story today, and already I'm hooked. I love the main idea, I mean, I think the twin sister thing is great! I'll read the rest later, and then it's on to the sequel. Great job!

Author's Response: thanks!!

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This is a really good story, i can't wait to read the next chapters! Is Malfoy suposed to be Lucious Malfoy?

Author's Response: Well i'm glad that you like it and yes Malfoy is Lucius. Thanks for the review~Lady

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YAY! I love this story:) Great job with the story line and the charactisation(spelling?) Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Gratias!!!

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Is that the end??? That's not fair *bursts into hysterical tears*

Author's Response: no thats not the end of the story!!! i accidently forgot to put up the last chapter, so you'll have to wait until i can get the disk with it on it!!

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