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Interesting first chapter though, liking the blatant name calling, well written so it reduces the cliché of it :D
Good Start :D xAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
O.k. First I just wanted to apologise for not reviewing earlier, what can i say, when there are 5 chapters up already and your becoming more than a little hooked, you tend to overlook the little box at the bottom just a little. :D Can you forgive me :D
Secondly, this is awesome, I love it, I am hooked and please update.
Lastly I will be reading the prequel to this :D But I can't promise to remember to review... :P
Thanks :D xAuthor's Response: No worries! :) I'm just flattered that the story pulled you in so much! I'm glad you liked it, and I'll update soon.
♥ Thank you for all of the lovely reviews! :) Report Review
Ooooh Burn from the house elf!
Loving it, so don't know what the hell is going on, and really would like to find out sometime soon, in the meantime however the suspense is quite enjoyable... :D Next Chapter PLEASE! :D :D :DAuthor's Response: I am glad that not knowing what's going on is a good thing! All will be revealed, in good time, in good time. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Ahhh... So God! Can't wait for more :D xAuthor's Response: And more shall come! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
*in a yorkshire accent* That were well good that were...
Brill, really liked it. Report Review
OH Cliff hanger... :D Very much enjoyed that chapter. Love the characterisations, as I may have said before :) Can't wait for the next chapter :DAuthor's Response: Ayup! I am sometimes cruel with cliffhangers, you may begin to learn. Glad you enjoyed this, I quite liked the banter in this chapter myself.
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
even I want Gregory to die, can you arrange for him to fall off a cliff or something?
BTW. you wrote scorpius instead of gregory about halfway through, talking about ron and hugo stopping him getting into the room.
Looking forward to the next chapter :D Report Review
Ahhh!!! Give me more, please I'm begging you... what the hell have they done to her?!!? Report Review
Interesting indeed... A tenuous link to be sure but hell lets run with it right :P Report Review
So far it is intriguing... I look forward to the rest of it... :D Report Review
That was really good... I really liked that... May have to find those one shots... Keep writing :DAuthor's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Um, I've written one one-shot that's on here (Trust in Me) but it's really not very good. If you'd like to know more about Louis and Victoire's reactions to their sister's death, you can check out my Mugglenet Fanfiction author page, under the name xxbabewithbrainsxx -- I have three stories featuring Louis, in this order: Glass, The Highway of Regret and Broken Glass, so do check them out and leave a review if you like :) Report Review
very suspicious ending I love it... as absorbed as I am I'd like to mention how mean I think you are for killing a three year old, not a criticism at all I love the story and I'm really gripped, just that I'm really hoping Rose didn't do it...Author's Response: Yes, ha, killing a three-year-old is terrible. I'm glad you're liking it so far :) Report Review
Hm very interesting... I'm assuming imperious curse or something, and what exactly is she trying to hide from everyone if she didn't do it? I'm intrigued :DAuthor's Response: Hiya :) Thank you for the review. You've obviously seen what happens to Rose in the end, so I won't answer any of your questions just yet, lol :) Report Review
This is good. Really good. I love your character and plot development. Hooked on the whole Scorpius/Miranda debacle, and wondering how long it's going to take rose to realise the Flynn is a douche...
Keep it up... I will be waiting with baited breath...Author's Response: Thank you! This is a plotty story, ultimately, but I try to keep the characters driving the action as much as possible. Scorpius/Miranda is a mystery that shall be unravelled at some point, and Rose/Flynn? Well, she knows he's not a saint, but he's so pretty... even smart girls are allowed their eye candy sometimes. ;)
Updates will be forthcoming. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Ooooh... Very nice... bit of fluffy to soften the sensitive issues... Good :DAuthor's Response: Thank you!!! Gotta love the fluffy! Thanks again for reading! Report Review
I love it. I cried. My BF took the piss... Lol.
Seriously, I love it, despite your doubts about the end I really like it.
Thank you.Author's Response: ohhh, im sorry i made you cry. haha but im glad you liked it, i really like that pairing. thank you so much for leaving a review, i love them! Report Review
Siriusly, best fic about this subject I have read... Love it. I love the ending and that Remus isn't pissed off love how James is furious though, although I think the ending is almost too light hearted, still love it though.
You also give a reason for them not being in the shack as Animagi that night which is another bonus. Report Review
Absolutely effing amazing... Love it :DAuthor's Response: Thank you! It's lovely to get a review on this again :) Report Review
Love it! Love it all... Feel a bit sorry for Mark... but then I would as That's my bfs name.. lol. Can't wait for the next one... :D Report Review
Normally I hate OOCness and ridiculous cliches like this... but right now, I just don't care... You may take that as a compliment, it was meant as such :D Report Review
You. Must. Write. More. Or I may go insane not knowing what is going to happen next... I would also like to make comment about how unbelievably much I want Tiffany to end up with Noah and not James...
Yeah, that's about it... for the moment anyways... Nice chapter, please update soon, thanks.
xAuthor's Response: Chapter ten should be out today or tomorrow! Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Report Review
updating with the next chapter asap would be much appreciated as I am really enjoying this story, great work, keep it up :D Report Review
nice first chapter, not too overstated, and I like your characterisation of Ginny, nice one :D Report Review
I'm not normally one for slash... but that was awesome... that worked really well. Nicely written, not to graphic, very tasteful. Report Review
I really don;t know why, but I don;t hate her, I mean I get the feeling I should, she's horrible and probably is the worst person in the world. But I don't hate her, is that weird?Author's Response: Nope, totally not weird ;P
I mean, you're supposed to understand that she isnt the best person thre is, but the hating is goig to come on slowly. Again thank you for reading and taking the time to tell me what you think. Report Review
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