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Review #26, by LillyRoseanneIgnite: On an Open Fire

8th October 2013:
YAY! Aweosmesauce chapter... and they've made up :D Love you!!!
LR
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Author's Response: It was a cute chapter to write, glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #27, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Rosy Reconciliation

7th October 2013:
YAY! Update! :D baby chapters are fine... (but I want more Roxanne hilarity, you know me :P ) It was a conversation that needed to happen... Can't wait for the next update
LR
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Author's Response: I wasn't happy with the baby chapter format but yeah it was an important conversation. I'm still wondering if it fits better as part of chapter eleven...oh well.

I have put a new chapter in the queue, with Roxy's prank finally revealed! Although Roxy herself still only shows up a little...chapter fourteen will have more of her. Just for you!
Thanks so much for reviewing! :) x


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Review #28, by LillyRoseanneIgnite: New Flames

5th October 2013:
Aw... bless Jones... he's being so sweet! I agree with Selena... scorpius does need to get over himself... love it!

Author's Response: Scorpius does. He's got woe, but, yeah. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #29, by LillyRoseanneResurrection : Discoveries

2nd October 2013:
I KNEW SHE WASN'T DEAD! :D love it!!! keep it up :D x

Author's Response: Haha sometimes great characters are too hard to keep dead! Thank you so much for the lovely review! Chapter 6 is currently in the works! :)

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Review #30, by LillyRoseanneUnexpected Parenthood: Chapter Thirty-One

30th September 2013:
I did wonder... Albus needs to grow a pair, not have them cut off though... Ahh the angstiness of it all :D

Author's Response: Haha, he does lol.

Thanks for R+R'ing!!

-Potterfan310


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Review #31, by LillyRoseanneMemory Lane : Epilogue.

30th September 2013:
So cute!!! Loved the whole dang thing... awesome idea. Well done :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

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Review #32, by LillyRoseanneIn the Arms of a Death-Eater: Saving Grace

28th September 2013:
So exciting! Although Neville really needs to get over himself... just saying, I can understand where he's coming from but he's being as judgemental as the people he hates for it... anyways, awesome chapter... :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!


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Review #33, by LillyRoseanneIn the Arms of a Death-Eater: Captured

28th September 2013:
Goyle is a beep and I cannot wait for them to take him down...

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

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Review #34, by LillyRoseanneIgnite: Out of the Kitchen

28th September 2013:
That banter had me creased with laughter!!! Love it, love the motivation and the fact that they are finally doing something active :D I forgive you for the absence as every chapter since has been fabulous :D x

Author's Response: I did enjoy the banter in this chapter, it was fun to write! Finally they got their act together, yeah. Guess we'll see how well that works out! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #35, by LillyRoseanneIgnite: Down in Flames

28th September 2013:
Active plan at last... fun fun fun :D

Author's Response: We'll see how well it works out! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #36, by LillyRoseanneUnexpected Parenthood: Chapter Thirty

23rd September 2013:
She's going to tell him! Can't wait! :D xxx

Author's Response: Maybe...

Thanks for R+R'ing!

-Potterfan310


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Review #37, by LillyRoseanneMemory Lane : Damned Unspeakables

23rd September 2013:
Happy Happy Happy... looking forward to the epilogue :D x

Author's Response: I'm glad you're happy! Hope you like the epilogue :) thank you!

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Review #38, by LillyRoseanneMemory Lane : Cimitero

23rd September 2013:
Well the graveyard scene nearly made me cry... but good chapter :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry for almost making you cry :p

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Review #39, by LillyRoseanneIn the Arms of a Death-Eater: Encounters

23rd September 2013:
Love it!!! The patronus change was a nice touch, also like that it took four of them ad him to be distracted by the patronus for them to get to him.

With Regards to Hermione and Draco... at last! :P Keep it up :D x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! Draco has always, and will always, do any thing he can to save his skin, so I wanted his capture to be realistic and not just him being overpowered by one guy.

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Review #40, by LillyRoseanneMemory Lane : Festive Flirting

15th September 2013:
I could see it coming but I laughed anyway... you're doing an awesome job... x

Author's Response: I'm glad you did! Thank you so much :)

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Review #41, by LillyRoseanneEasy O: Chapter 1: Departure

6th September 2013:
Your paragraphs are quite long... also in England we use pounds and pence not Euros and cents... :) x
Apart from that it was a good start and now off to the next chapter...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

You probably did figure out that I am indeed not from England. I will have to go back and edit that at some point so that I'm more consistent. And I can promise that I am getting better about having so many long paragraphs but at times I find myself getting lost in my writing and before I know it I find myself trying to move things around and delete things so that it isn't as overwhelming as some of these earlier chapters get.


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Review #42, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws, and Revealing the Room of Requirement

27th August 2013:
YAY! Roxanne getting her Prank on!!! The best kind of chapter... not that i'm not loving the Hatbus stuff, I am... but you know me and Rox... :P

I Love her panic session at the beginning and that he's all like 'lol' let's scare the panicking person so she screams tehehe :P

Am however disappointed that the next chapter isn't already up... Pretty please... I'll give you another chapter of Lucky one... And virtual cookies... :D x

Author's Response: I know, so mean of him, yet so worth it :D
I'm trying really hard haha! But I'm so busy at the moment, it might be a while. And a lot seems to want to happen in this next chapter, that I want to get right otherwise it might ruin things. For example, I really want Roxy's prank to be good!!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing so far, you're the best. I really think you should give me another chapter of lucky one anyway. And some virtual cookies would not go astray heehee xx


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Review #43, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws, and Reviewing Recent Romance

27th August 2013:
Well, the Albus POV was short but sweet, not entirely sure you NEEDED it, but it worked. Also, love his sarcastic comments, bless him :D x

Author's Response: It maybe wasn't entirely necessary, although now I can use his POV later if I want :) I'm glad you think it worked though, it was kinda fun to write a different perspective even just for a little bit :)

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Review #44, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Romantic Recompense

27th August 2013:
Well that only took nine chapters... not bad considering he wasn't really in chapter one and they hated each other back then... :P
Love it... but there's now going to be another pic of them in the paper isn't there... :D x

Author's Response: I know, finally right?! Haha I didn't want to drag it on too long, but at the same time, I didn't want it to be an automatic relationship. I hope I managed the build up ok :) We shall have to see how it pans out ;)

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Review #45, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws, and Rather Rosy Revelations

27th August 2013:
Oh dear... what did Albus do...? I shall find out shan't I as luckily for me the next chapter is Validated already :D Bully for Me!!! :P x

Author's Response: He's been a bit of an idiot. Because of course, something had to go wrong :P I'm loving these reviews, it's so nice that you're doing every single chapter you've read! I'll admit I'm not that dedicated a reviewer! So thank you!

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Review #46, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws, and Rather Ridiculous References

27th August 2013:
Good good, flowers thing, I approve.

Also approve of the Tolkein, right now I am about twenty minutes from where he did most of his growing up and writing, how cool is that... :D

Author's Response: I approve of your approval :D I don't know, I wanted to do something ridiculously cute to officially show that Albus has a soft side. I mean, he's been angsty and he will be again. But for now...
That is very cool!! I'm in uncultured 'Straya, near no famous people's home towns...shame.


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Review #47, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Reactive Rescue

27th August 2013:
So sweet! Bless his little cotton socks... It is Albus right cause I'm sooo gonna want to kill you if it isn't... :P x

Author's Response: Maybe. Well you read the next chapter and found out! :D

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Review #48, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws, and Rather Random Replies

27th August 2013:
I love the fact that you did this with the word happy (Happy!) It made me laugh as well as getting the whole 'OMG this has happened *cue girly squee* but *don't cue girly squee cause I don't want to look weird*' thing.

Predictable as him being the tutee was, it worked :D

Author's Response: Yay I'm glad some of Harriet's internal monologue is having it's desired effect! :D Yeah I know, so predictable, but so worth it ;)

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Review #49, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws and a Rather Rude Reception

25th August 2013:
Ahahahaha love Roxanne she is my favourite next gen character... so yeah will be reading other chapters son alas, now I must go to bed... keep it up :) x

Author's Response: Haha I love Roxanne too! Definitely doesn't get enough of a look in re. Fanfics. Please do, I'd love to know what you think :) thanks so much for the review!

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Review #50, by LillyRoseanneUnbroken: Chapter 1

20th August 2013:
A lot of intrigue, why doesn't she want to sleep in a room on her own?
Why, when she clearly doesn't like Scorpius has he offered to sleep in the same room as her?
Very much looking forward to the rest of this story.
Only thing I might suggest is maybe a little more introduction to the different characters at the beginning we get a good description of Melissa, but none of the others or what their actual day to day relationships are like, which once established will help us understand their reactions to each other in later chapters better. Hope that makes sense.
LR
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Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, and giving me so much feedback! I'll definitely try to describe the characters a bit better, but I'm also trying to focus mainly on Scorp and Rose right now. I am so, so sorry on the long wait that you're had on this response and the 5th chapter, but I will get the next chapter up soon. Life's been hectic. Thanks again!

~Rintunes


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