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Review #1, by LillyRoseanneInitiate: A Proper Welcome

12th April 2014:
I laughed SO hard at the end I actually had a coughing fit... I love it!

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Review #2, by LillyRoseanneInitiate: The Professor's Intervention

25th March 2014:
You are so mean woth your terrible terrible cliff hanger! Please, please, please, let him be a Gryffindor!

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Review #3, by LillyRoseanneInnocent: Fallen Soldier

2nd February 2014:
Well all I can say is WOW! I had a suspicion that something didn't add up and I did suspect that Scrimgeour was behind it, but that was an awesome twist, well done you!

Author's Response: Haha, yes, I dropped a few hints along the way - a lot of people suspected - but I also tried to crush that as a possibility. :P But now the truth's out; it was a test. :P
Thank you, and you're welcome. :)
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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Review #4, by LillyRoseanneInnocent: Dystopian December

11th January 2014:
Dun dun duh! Why is the Sneakoscope going off? Why? Awesome chapter as always... Are Remus and Dumbledore talking to the same person? Can't wait for the next chapter!
LR
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Author's Response: You'll find out shortly... Aww, thank you!
They are, yes... :S Well picked!
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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Review #5, by LillyRoseanneInnocent: The Quest For Answers

15th December 2013:
WHAT?!!?!!?!!?!!?!!?
I now have absolutely no idea what is going on... You seriously have me stumped... Congratulations...
Awesome as always, keep it up!
LR
xxx

Author's Response: I know - it's all still a bit confusing at the moment, I'm afraid. :S Haha, umm, thank you? :P
I'll try! :D
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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Review #6, by LillyRoseanneEighteen Pleats: Eighteen Pleats

11th December 2013:
Very nice... I like how you keep the suspense, and that you don't know what she is until he does, despite the fact that it's from her point of view. I liked your MacGuffin, I don't have a lot of experience with them (I don't think, but I think I may have used one in a script... anyways) but it worked. I was left wondering what it was once again until the end when it was explained quite well.

Loved it :D

Author's Response: Hey LillyRoseanne!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm really glad that you felt the suspense in the story! I never feel like I'm very good at portraying suspense, but people keep telling me that I really succeeded at it in this story, and I'm so happy about that! I'm glad that my MacGuffin worked too! That was really difficult for me to figure out. The concept itself is so vague! Anyhow, I'm glad that you liked the story! Thanks again!

--Emily


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Review #7, by LillyRoseanneInnocent: Things To Say

27th November 2013:
Pahahahaha at Sirius and the lips thing... Actually crying with laughter and I plan on going back and reading that bit whenever I feel down or upset... :P And I must admit I giggled again when he told Lily and James about it...

Awesome chapter :D Loving every word!

LR
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Author's Response: Haha, it was definitely one of his finer comical moments, I think. :P And also quite sound advice, in the end. :P Haha, I know - it's the sort of thing they'd have loved to hear about. :)
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'm sorry I've been so terrible with answering reviews lately. :S I'll try to be better in the future. :)
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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Review #8, by LillyRoseanneTaking the Biscuit: Family Matters

27th November 2013:
OMG Roxanne is such a beep!
She's my favourite Weasley and you're making em hate her... :(... Keep writing and i might forgive you :P
LR
x

Author's Response: Yeah, Roxanne's not the best :P Thanks for the review!

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Review #9, by LillyRoseanneChalk and Cheese: Chalk and Cheese

28th October 2013:
Definitely well written and an interesting idea, not entirely sure it's my cup of tea though, but that said it was very good.

Good job!
LR
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Author's Response: Thank you, I get that it won't be to everyone's tastes with it being a parody :)

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Review #10, by LillyRoseanneUnrequited: Unrequited

28th October 2013:
I like your first two sentences, they really give a good description of oppressive darkness, however, your third sentence in that paragraph just seems a little jarring in comparison. I think for me at least, that the word 'tread' is what causes this. But anyway.

I like that even the Baron considers that Rowena may care more for her diadem than she did for her daughter, making me wonder, that for all her wisdom how she didn't see it coming. Which I think, had you intended for this to be more than just a one shot, would have been an interesting idea to explore. In this as it stands though, it gives us a teasing hint as to Helena's motivation for running away.

I also like how the Baron seems to be so calm and in control to start with, methodically going about finding her, bribing the wizard to tell him how to find her. Then all of a sudden he sees red and turns into this jealous murderer, and your use of italics to show this internal thought pattern and his memories was really clever and well executed. Then the red fades and he's left to deal, or not, with what he's done. I think the Baron really does show true Slytherin cowardice in that moment, nice.

Overall I really enjoyed it... Well done
LR
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Author's Response: It's taken me far too long to reply to this review, I blame NaNo!

I always found the story of the Baron and Helena really interesting so it was nice to be able to explore my own headcanon of it. Personally, I think that Rowena would have been a little arrogant about the wit that she had because of the diadem and the idea that someone could be clever enough to steal it from her would be preposterous which was ultimately her downfall.

The Baron is certainly an interesting character to write. We know he was capable of love because he was in love with Helena so I wanted to show that side of him but obviously he had a flip side to his character and I wanted to write a good balance of both.

I'm really pleased you enjoyed it and I'll take a look at that sentence again, thank you :)

Dee x


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Review #11, by LillyRoseanneInnocent: Monsters In The Manor

27th October 2013:
Poor Draco...

Love the Hermione-Harry-Blaise trio thing you've got going on... I wanna know what Hermione's first piece of magic was!

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Review #12, by LillyRoseanneIgnite: Blaze of Glory

27th October 2013:
I know exactly how you feel, but you used the wrong word, it is not the worst thing you've ever written, it is the most emotionally evil thing you've ever written and I loved it! That said, you didn't kill Scorpius, you nearly did, but you didn't, and although i'm being a complete hypocrite I respect your restraint. However, poor Selena...

I accept your apology, and I forgive you, because I'm nice like that. Can't wait for the next update :) Still loving it!
LR
x

Author's Response: It's certainly the most horrid thing I've written! It was gut-wrenching, really. Scorpius' self-sacrifice was a fake-out, I never really considered killing him. That was, I confess, to toy with you and then put Methy in his place.

More updates soon. Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #13, by LillyRoseanneIn the Arms of a Death-Eater: The Last Stand

25th October 2013:
Man that was good... Very sad that you killed them, but I have done something similar in my own Dramione, so no fear, I'm not going to flame you cause that's just cruel :P
Awesome story, and you should be extremely proud of yourself, so glad I've read this :D Very unexpected ending, although foreshadowed in the dream a little, so I should have been really.
Well done you!!!
LR
x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the awesome review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and understand the poetic ending for the two. Thank you so much for enjoying my story!

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Review #14, by LillyRoseanneUnexpected Parenthood: Chapter Thirty-Three

22nd October 2013:
Definite big sigh of relief and happy dancing cause of Al of Flick... but she seriously needs to tall him now... :D x

Author's Response: I know right, happy dances all around! :D

Al finds out soon enough...

Thanks for R+R'ing!

-Potterfan310


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Review #15, by LillyRoseanneIn the Arms of a Death-Eater: Christmas at the Manor

22nd October 2013:
Narcissa is a beep but i suppose its been instilled inher since she was little so that'd be a hard thing to break free from and she hasn't had years in Azkaban to make her think about it like Draco has...

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yes, Narcissa has lived her life the same way and isn't going to be changing any time soon.

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Review #16, by LillyRoseanneIn the Arms of a Death-Eater: Rescued

22nd October 2013:
Fabulous chapter... finally they got it on! lol... Love Hermione's little chat with Alicia, worked so well!
LR
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Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!

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Review #17, by LillyRoseanneIgnite: Freeze Out

22nd October 2013:
YES! Fab chapter!!! Loved the altercation in the forest and Thane having had a rethink of his own morals and stuff :D And Rose is ok so i love you for that too...

Author's Response: Thane's morals and reasons will remain, I suspect, nebulous - but now we know he has them! Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #18, by LillyRoseanneIgnite: Melt Into Me

22nd October 2013:
Naw... Selena and Mathusela... So cute... and Harry's letter to scorpius made me cry too, it was so sweet and I really want scorp to succeed... and rose to live and them to get through this... must stop crying and being overly emotional now...
LR
x

Author's Response: Haha, I don't mind if I get an emotional response! Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for reviewing!

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Review #19, by LillyRoseanneIgnite: Hot Blooded

22nd October 2013:
GO LOCKETT! Awesome chapter as always, love it :D

Author's Response: Lockett at her best here, yup! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #20, by LillyRoseanne30 Days of You and Me: Okay

22nd October 2013:
You are so mean! I do however forgive you for your meanness and accept that as the author you know what you are doing... I hope... Love it as always :D
LR
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Review #21, by LillyRoseanneI Saw Him Once : I Saw Him Once

21st October 2013:
Naw!
That was so cute! I absolutely love it and the whole thing just made me smile, that song is SO Luna and I love how Ned is as nutty as she is. Bless them!
Awesome challenge entry, thank you so much!
Will be PMing you on the forums soon...
LR
x

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it. The challenge was a great idea and gave me an excuse to write my first song fic :)

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Review #22, by LillyRoseanneInnocent: Dora And The Dictionary

14th October 2013:
Man I love this story... not sure if them finding marlene would be a good thing or not... Loving the Harry & Draco banter and the Snape & Sirius Banter too and then moony comes in and he's just confused... LOL xx

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Review #23, by LillyRoseanneIgnite: Cold as Ice

14th October 2013:
NO! ROSE! Ouch! Erm... please let her O.k... Pretty Please...

Author's Response: She might be. She might not be! I am capricious, ha!

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Review #24, by LillyRoseanneRoxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Ravishing Rebel: Roxanne, Ravenclaws, and a Rather Remarkable Race

10th October 2013:
Ha ha ha!!! Minerva overcomes the giant snowball... Love it :P Delaying that by a chapter was perfectly accptable... :D

Author's Response: I'm super glad you liked it and think it was worth the wait :D Thanks for reviewing again x

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Review #25, by LillyRoseanneIn the Arms of a Death-Eater: Almost

10th October 2013:
Yay! Go Ron, doing something right... Love it :D

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

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