Haha, very interesting read. :P (I found this story modding TDA and thought it looked fun.)

LOL at Draco being part veela, the unicorn's name, Mia's name XD and everything else. The only thing is, the Zabinis are not Caucasian. But maybe that's part of the parody/clicheness? lol.

Anyways, great job. A parody is good when it's almost painful to read because it's so true. Yours was. XD I almost stopped like five times but had to keep reading. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Glad it looked fun! And yeah, the Zabini race change is part of the clicheness. I always see them magically become Italian, Spanish, anything but the race they ACTUALLY are. So I decided to add it in :P

Thank you so much! I'm glad it was entertaining :D

 Report Review

"Way to screw things up! I'm nevah gonna get a raise."
That line made me smile lots. :)

I'm so sad to see the journey come to an end, but I love how you pulled this all off! It's such an inspiration and you really are a great writer and a funny girl. Please keep writing, even if it isn't fanfiction, because there's just some sort of charismatic force to your words.

I'll pray I never blackout and get stuck in a Harry Potter romance. ;)

xxx

 Report Review

OMG awesome. So admitting none of it was real was the key to going back to reality?

 Report Review

Oh man, this is pretty intense. lol. :) Two more chapters... :'(

 Report Review

Oh geez, Fall Out Boy. XD Creepin' on the teenage witches.

 Report Review

This was amazing! :) Great update. Very interesting to see how as Lydia ignores the story, the OCs become more "normal" and things seem more canon. I like it a lot.

 Report Review

This is so exciting. :D Yay awesome chapter.

 Report Review

Aww, I love that she has a crush on Harry finally. :D

 Report Review

Take that, Draco Malfoy. XD

 Report Review

"Gosh, you're so perverted!" I yelled.
"I'm just a guy," he shrugged nonchalantly.
"No, you're a freak who defies nature. Now get out of my room."
---
So funny. XD I loved it. Seems as though Demeter is falling for Draco. :O

 Report Review

That last sentence is golden!
I loved this chapter. :) It really, really, REALLY made me want smores, and I don't think they made smores even? Just crispy marshmallows. But still. XD
Awesome job! :)

 Report Review

I love Dee as a character -- she's so rude but she's allowed to be because none of it is real... I would totally act the same way if it meant no consequence (since I'm usually the opposite in RL -- it'd be a nice break). Anyways, I liked this chapter. :)

 Report Review

Nice. :D
I really liked the morphing-dream-thing. It was cool. :)

 Report Review

I'm so glad Dee and Ria made up :)
Yayyy.

 Report Review

OMG this was so funny. XD I loved this part:
"What, you don't want a piece of this?"
"Sorry, I'm into straight noses."

Too good, too good.

 Report Review

LOL of course, prophecies. It seems Lydia's fanfic has no plot yet it's so fascinating.

I can't wait to read more :)

 Report Review

This was my favorite yet. :) So much drama, I love it. :D

 Report Review

Wow. XD I love how you wrote the author's note as a "shrill exclamation" -- genius.

 Report Review

Oooh, nice unexpected drama. I like it :) It's such a cool idea to have Ria be another "fake" from the real world. :D

 Report Review

I love the song. XD Of course they would have lovely voices too.

 Report Review

I always love your chapter disclaimers. They are so funny. XD And the chapter title rocks. If I lost seven inches, I'd be really mad. I'd hate to be short. o_O Poor Dee. XD

 Report Review

Poor Pluto. I love how you worked that in there. XD It's awesome.

 Report Review

LOL. Special magic. Special flirting skills. Lovely song choice too. XD This chapter was awesome. Great job :)

 Report Review

The voices. Classic.
Awesome chapter. I liked how her hair got longer. XD

 Report Review

Hahaha I love this because Malfoy IS portrayed as a jerk/potential jailbird and he would never do anything like that in real canon... This story is awesome. :)

 Report Review