Yayyy!! It's pretty. I'm glad that they're finally pregnant, too. It's so lovely! Little Harry's almost along;) This chapter is very well written, Kay. You're a very talented writer. I love reading this story. One day, I will re-read the entire thing in one day, and I will enjoy it greatly;) Thanks for having it posted Report Review
This started out so sadly...but it was really good. At first I was a little skeptical about James calling Lily a "bitch," but what else is he going to call her? Haha.
AAAHHHH!!! She's finally pregnanttttt!! I can't waittt for the next chapter. This was really good, the symptoms seemed real for a pregnant woman. You did a really good job with details and writing structure.
Awesome chapter, Kay. I like being able to get into the mind of Lily when she's at home, and sometimes James. I love this story.Author's Response:
1) yeah, i know right. I didn't really know either so i was like okay what the hell. =]
2) I've had nine kids. Of course I know the symptoms.
just kidding everyone. I'm only 16.
3) and thank youuuuu! Report Review
You are so effing awesome with this storyyyy. Good first chapter! I know it's very, VERY late, but I'm starting!
No! Cliff hanger. Hopefully you post another chapter. Report Review
I like how you use detail that has already been given to you in the actual books.
Good chapter! Report Review
Things are heating up! Sweet.
Ron and Hermione do make a good pair...they go together in my story toooo. !! Report Review
This is a good start, but isn't Hedwig a girl?
Cool chapter. You have good writing, and it's well-detailed. Report Review
Your writing is very sophisticated, and your story is really interesting. Great job!
♥ IdrisAuthor's Response: -beams- Why thank you Idris! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
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