Yayyy!! It's pretty. I'm glad that they're finally pregnant, too. It's so lovely! Little Harry's almost along;) This chapter is very well written, Kay. You're a very talented writer. I love reading this story. One day, I will re-read the entire thing in one day, and I will enjoy it greatly;) Thanks for having it posted

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This started out so sadly...but it was really good. At first I was a little skeptical about James calling Lily a "bitch," but what else is he going to call her? Haha.

AAAHHHH!!! She's finally pregnanttttt!! I can't waittt for the next chapter. This was really good, the symptoms seemed real for a pregnant woman. You did a really good job with details and writing structure.

Awesome chapter, Kay. I like being able to get into the mind of Lily when she's at home, and sometimes James. I love this story.

Author's Response:
1) yeah, i know right. I didn't really know either so i was like okay what the hell. =]

2) I've had nine kids. Of course I know the symptoms.

just kidding everyone. I'm only 16.


3) and thank youuuuu!

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You are so effing awesome with this storyyyy. Good first chapter! I know it's very, VERY late, but I'm starting!



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No! Cliff hanger. Hopefully you post another chapter.

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I like how you use detail that has already been given to you in the actual books.

Good chapter!

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Things are heating up! Sweet.

Ron and Hermione do make a good pair...they go together in my story toooo. !!

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This is a good start, but isn't Hedwig a girl?

Cool chapter. You have good writing, and it's well-detailed.

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Your writing is very sophisticated, and your story is really interesting. Great job!

♥ Idris

Author's Response: -beams- Why thank you Idris! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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