Well...I think it's a bit too...played out. It seems like you were just desperate to write a Draco/Hermione fic, and just put out something random. But, as a plus, your writing skills are pretty good. Just put more thought into your next story, hun.Author's Response: I am just begining to write so I didn't expect my story to be like the best one there is and I hope my next one will be better. Report Review
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