{reviewid: 2046455, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
1st February 2009:
This is so original! Please update SOON!!
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{reviewid: 1942602, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
4th June 2008:
ouch Dom! haha
I have to say you are a master at creating characters; you've managed to give each and every one of the weasley-potter & cie kids a very different and believable personality (and what's even better is that you stuck to the family tree). Seriously, that's quite an achievement! Update quick please!
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{reviewid: 1940699, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
2nd June 2008:
yeah, go Rosie! Twist James' hair! haha, that was brilliant
The Scorpius POV was interesting - he's almost as sarcastic as Rose. Jenny's cool too, can't wait to see what's next!
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{reviewid: 1940678, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
2nd June 2008:
an emo Hugo, well, what do you know? hehe, nice one - suits him well
I like Mark's character - finally a good guy!
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{reviewid: 1940624, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
2nd June 2008:
Draco... bald! That was a shock. hehe
I understand Rose's choice though. I hope things get better for her, poor kid! Awesome writing, as usual :D
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{reviewid: 1939695, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
2nd June 2008:
Now that's some serious shocker! waou, talk about drama. I'm reading the next chapter right away!
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{reviewid: 1939660, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
1st June 2008:
The 'pull my finger' and 'Hitler' part had me puffing again. haha good one
Oooh, starting to get serious here! can't wait to see when she's going to break the news!
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{reviewid: 1939637, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
1st June 2008:
Woa! That's one emotion-packed chapter - yet awesome all the same. Haha, Hugo's quite the character - I really like him, and Ted. On to next chapter!
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{reviewid: 1939615, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
1st June 2008:
I love the way you're dealing with such a serious and heavy subject yet manage to make it funny and enjoyable. Extra kuddos for the plot twists! Completely evil of course, but essential to every good story :D Keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1939581, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
1st June 2008:
I adore this story! So funny, had me laughing out loud. Especially the 'Because James is a strange individual.' and the 'Pull my finger' part. I mean: hilarious. This is really making my day!
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{reviewid: 1939571, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
1st June 2008:
Oh my gosh! That was hilarious! The way you just keep adding and adding stuff - yet everything wonderfully makes sense - was just... wow. I'm definitely reading the next chapters!
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{reviewid: 1921580, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
12th May 2008:
awesomely well-written! you portray the baby's delicacy very well - you should definitely post more. It was a pleasure to read and full of emotion and theme for a one-shot. Nice!!
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{reviewid: 1913773, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
4th May 2008:
nice one-shot; although you could have developed a bit more. haha, Draco and science... well, who knows? Nice quote, and nice writing! I must say I really like the end too.
Author's Response: What exactly should I have gone on about?
Science or Draco?
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{reviewid: 1913651, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
3rd May 2008:
It was a nice, familiar and somewhat cheery chapter. Typical Harry and Ron... being late and such. Everyone was in character, which was fantastic. Once again, good chapter!
Author's Response: Awee, thanks!!
You soo rock!! Yeah lol, that damn first day back, you know?
;]
~d_f
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{reviewid: 1913636, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
3rd May 2008:
nice description! and extra kuddos for the cliffhanger - I wonder what'll happen. Although the setting had me quite puzzled for a moment - are you disregarding book 7? Anyways, nice vocabulary!
Author's Response: hah thanks!!
yes, i am lol! im gonna describe their 7th yr if they had actually gone to Hogwarts.
Thank youu
~d_f
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{reviewid: 1894600, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
13th April 2008:
such an unexpected ending! yet it makes sense: the whole Fergie thing wasn't meant to last, I guess
nice theme! can't wait for the sequel
Author's Response: Thanks =D
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{reviewid: 1891765, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
10th April 2008:
Awww! You should probably put a tissue warning!... Hermione's letter moved me; especially what she wrote to her daughter. Well-written!
Author's Response: :] I'm glad that you liked it! Yes.. I know it's pretty sad, I'd had the idea for that story floating around in my mind and was so proud of myself when I got it onto paper. Thank you for reviewing.--Mimi
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{reviewid: 1884687, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
3rd April 2008:
m 'You'll be the death of me.' Wait... that sounds familiar... oh yeah: EDWARD! lol It really fitted nice when Draco said it. I'm enjoying this fanfic - it's my dose of romance! Although, the whole plot is also amazing. Keep writing!
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{reviewid: 1884032, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
2nd April 2008:
That Hollow Hope Draught idea was brilliant; mega-kuddos for thinking it up! Can't wait to see what's truly up with Ron... although, like Hermione, I think I have an idea as well... Keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1883841, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
2nd April 2008:
'To wake, or not to wake. That is the goddamn question.'
That was brilliant. Just, brilliant.
and the 'uber-jerks' part got me laughing, so kuddos for that!
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{reviewid: 1883793, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
2nd April 2008:
'Heck, Severus wasn’t very good news.'
That was funny. Awesome start!
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{reviewid: 1882161, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
30th March 2008:
I love the way you start by describing a familiar scene and end with introducing your OC in the picture. That was awesome.
And I also like the idea of 'outcast Slytherins' - you don't see that very often, don't you!
Great beginning! (Also, the sarcasm is quite funny and on-the-spot, haha)
Author's Response: Thank you for your amazing comment!
I really like the outcast Slytherin's idea too, as you said it is not a very common idea to use in fanfictions. Hence why I used it xD
I really like sarcastic characters, they tend to draw me to the story/fiction.
Once again, Thank you So Much for reviewing.
*inserts millions of hugs*
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{reviewid: 1880288, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
29th March 2008:
I like the last three lines - they're full of meaning. What else can I say? Another great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks for letting me know!!!! :D
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{reviewid: 1876709, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
25th March 2008:
sweet and short
I really like the first paragraph; it was really nicely put
and I must say I agree with Harry, I mean, finally! hehe
Author's Response: I know! Thanks for the review!
P.S. Did you totallly scream when they smooched in deathly hallows? I did! :)
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{reviewid: 1872352, reviewer: 'wings_of_shadow'}
22nd March 2008:
I'm can't wait to meet Kyle; he sounds like fun. Funny beginning!
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