Oooh! I love your story. :) It's very similar to VM (why I looked at it) but it gives it's own taste!
The only part I'm a little troubled about is SB. :( I like him and this is way out of character for him. :(
9/10.Author's Response: Dear Hazelnutter,
I'm so glad that you got to have a look at VMars. But I'm very sorry if the way I portrayed Sirius is not to your liking. But who knows, maybe he might be able to redeem himself later in the story...=)
Your Obedient Servant,
The Phantom Report Review
It was totally worth it! It's the longest chappie, but it felt like the shortest! wah. More! :D
hazAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it was. ^_^
Was it really the longest?
Wow. Well, hopefully I'll get another update up soon. Report Review
I didn't think I'd like this, but I do! I love how she's down to earth and clumsy and LIKES sirius.oh love, thanks! This is going in my fav list!Author's Response: i got scared when you said you didnt think you would like it! doesnt everyone LIKE sirius? lollll. yay! its on your favorites! yay! Report Review
nice! why didn't u update so long? but i loved it anyhowAuthor's Response: I just completely forgot about it and I got re-e-e-eally bad writer's block. Report Review
i like this story alot!Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! Report Review
oh awesome! WONDERFUL!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
LOL, very amusing, thanks! :DAuthor's Response: glad you liked! =D Report Review
Oh yay! If I knew where your school was I'd personally go and give them a hand cooked plate of cookies! :D (Well, actually I'd have my mom make them because last time I tried to make anything.*flashback* well, everyone's better off not knowing what.)
-HazelAuthor's Response: Yay!
i'm the world's worst suck up, so i would need the help. lol. Haha. Report Review
[rotfl] i may never stop laughing.I will die in laughter.oh woe! *guffaws of laughter*Author's Response: :O save yourself! dying of laughter is not an honorable death x) but yeah, i've laughed so hard before that my stomach hurt like hell. i had to lie on my bed for fifteen minutes to make it feel better x) thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
Grr.I swear this chapter was too short! Good but short.
Thanks for the update...oh sliver locket...cool.
-HazAuthor's Response: Too short? Aw, sorry. ^_^
Thank you. Report Review
Oh. My. God.
That's so cute! I read this a while back before it was done, but I forgot about this, and so i reread the whole story.so cute! :D Great job!
ps. if you have the time could you look at my stories and give me some helpful critisism? Report Review
I love how you update so fast! oh thanks! This chapter wasn't too bad, I preferred the previous chapter more but it's lovely, keep updating! Me want Sirius and Melody together soon! :D
-HazAuthor's Response: Haha. I love being able to update it. lol.
Yes, this chapter wasn't quite as exciting. But there will be exciting ones soon. ^_^
Thanks. Report Review
I'm so close to crying in happiness! *weeps* It's so beautiful!
No, I like how Melody is slowly getting closer to Lily and Lisa, you know having TRUE friends. And I loved the blushing and Sirius parts!
Happy New Years, thanks for the gift (the update) :)
Much love and happiness,
HazAuthor's Response: Are you serious?
EWW, but cool. I love the story, I love the parts where lily and james argue but depending on it, I feel like arguing and get into a heated discussion too! PLEASE hurry up and post! You're killing me here!
-haz Report Review
OMG! I LOVE YOU!
[grin] Love the story, at the moment it's easy one of my favorites, besides Line and Sinker and the one about Regulus the Death Eater, etc. :D Thanks so much for updating! I love this chappie it was so great! update soon again!
and would you mind in your spare time looking at my stories? :) It's okay if you can't, but it'd mean a big thing to have a talented writer look at give you helpful critizism?
-HazelAuthor's Response: Oh, I love you too!
*runs and hugs hazelnutter* Sorry. I'm excited when I stay up till two in the morning. ^_^
Thank you. Aw, Line and Sinker is one of your favorites and I have it one hold? Don't i feel bad. it will be back. as soon as I finish star-crossed and one other story. then i'll start it up again. so sorry.
In my spare time? I have a lot of that and I'll see if I can put more aside for your stories. haha. i say i'm busy all the time, but that's just really because i constantly am doing something else. lol. I'll try and read your sometime soon. Report Review
Oh wow this is intense! I loved it. And there are few stories I really like that are short. You should a long romance between a Potter and a _ (fill in the blank) from way before Lily and James!
Btw, then doesn't that mean Sirius and Lily are related? I mean I know it's not really (right?) but still, supposing it was, I hate to think of the Sirius/Lily stories!
This was so sad though :'(Author's Response: Yes I could certainly do that... but I have already so many fics. I'd better complete them or some people will hex me! lol.
Sirius and James would be related to Lily, if my fic was canon. But Cass and John "lived" at the beginning of the XIXth century, and they were issued from distant branches of their respective families.
Yes, it was sad, sorry. I'm glad you liked it, though.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Anne Report Review
Hello Carolyn, :) Awesome story you have here! Um, I kind of like your title right now, because even though the other titles you're looking out sound cool, they don't fit the whole story description/summary/whatever. :) But I won't throw a brat's fit if you name it that or something like that. :)Author's Response: Hello Hazelnutter.
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. haha. No, i meant that to be the title of the next chapter. not the whole story or whatever. haha. ^_^ Report Review
awesome- why haven't u pdated? :P Update, please? Report Review
I'm extremely mad you hadn't updated forever. But now it's okay coz you updated! Keep updating, I love this story really, I do! :)
-hazelAuthor's Response: I know! I'm sorry for making you have to wait forever... but to sort of appease people I threw in the H/G acton (which, by the way, wasn't originally there. I felt like being nice to my readers lol). I'll keep on updating - I'm so happy that you love the story!
Thanks for reviewing! ♥
- Terri Report Review
aweoms echappie! :D :DAuthor's Response: thanks! Report Review
i love it!
This chapter was the best, it got me into the story more, actually. :)
So keep up the writing unless you want me to rally up people to protest against your house, "PRETTY GIRL!" and chanting, "we want pretty girl! when do we want it? now! by who do we want it? this author!" :DAuthor's Response: I think I would be more concerned with you all knowing where my house is then getting another chapter up, lol. Thanks though! I appreciate that you would go to such lengths for another chapter. haha. It'll be out as soon as I can get it typed. Report Review
um I want the Weasley pie to win! :DAuthor's Response: That would be the blueberry one ;) I'll record your vote! Report Review
Hi! I love your chappie! It was awesome, and I expecially love the part where Lindsay couldn't think and just ran? I wish you'd have showed her running and her thoughts (more) and a breakdown (which is sort of what she went through wasn't it?). :) But all in all I adored this chapter! 10/10Author's Response: hey thanks and yeah i wanted to and the original scribblings i called a chapter did but i didnt like what i had written so it was cut!!! i may go back and try to add more.
in the mean time thanks for your comments!!! Report Review
awesome! :DAuthor's Response: thanks! Report Review
v. good.I like the regulus and sirius scene and darcy going inside their heads :)Author's Response: thanks. i had a hard time with that scene. Report Review
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