The short sentences made the fic a bit choppy, but I liked it anyway. You might want to check for typos, though. The slight twist at the end was rather interesting since I thought Harry was originally referring to Ginny (; Overall nice job ^^

Author's Response: Thanks for the review I appreciate it! I'll keep what you said about grammer in mind!:)

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I really like this so far. A few mistakes here and there, but very interesting ^^ I can't wait for an update (=

Author's Response: i'll check up on those mistakes and i'll try to update in reasonable time.

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Very well written ^^ I can't wait for chapter three! (=

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Ha! Go Sirius! That was brilliant, awesome fic! Aah, gotta <3 Sirius. This is sooo going on my favorites list (=

Author's Response: Many thanks for such a lovely review! Lol, now I'm going to have to keep a tally of how many of you guys took Sirius' side, and how many rejoiced when Narcissa slapped him... it's too funny. I love how people see the story from both points of view. =)

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Very well written! I love your style of writing; it's very descriptive. ^^ Excellent job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it! =)

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Awww! Poor Hermione! I really liked the way you had this story play out, especially with the pictures at the end (= I'm going to check out your other fics, too ^^

Author's Response: oh wow thank you...i hope you enjoy the others as well....only one is complete but it's a series...chapter two (really one) is posted for part 2

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Wow! I love your writing style (= You got me hooked into it, and I couldn't help but continue. I'm looking forward to chapter five ^^

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chapter five should be up sometime in the next week. :)

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Wow. Very well written-- keep up the brilliant work! =)

Author's Response: Doing my best. Thank you!

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lol. This is really brilliant so far =) I love the exchanges between Ron and Hermione.. I can't wait for more!! ^^

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