And I was so set for another chapter! This is great! I love the inner monologues and the typical thoughts and wow! An adult Harry who has defeated Voldemort but is unsatisfied with his life. Now that's something you don't see every day. I love you writing style and can't wait to see more of this! Report Review
This is great! I'm really enjoying this fic. The total and complete tension in the air is wonderful. Avery seems like a complete prat, I have to say, but anyone who isn't Harry and is dating Ginny is, isn't he? Well, in the world of H.M.S Orange Crush it is. I can't wait to see more!!!!! *Goes to find that 'Add to Favourites' button*Author's Response: Why yes, my sentiments exactly; Avery=Prat: Ginny with any other guy=Prat. I'm glad you like the fic, and I'm so honored you would add me to your favs. Thanks bunches! Report Review
I really hope your little promise means you'll be updating soon because if not...well...haven't gotten that far yet but...it won't be pretty so please just return and give us another chapter. See, the main character blacking out at the very end of chapter - that would be called a cliffhanger and though writers love them dearly, readers hate them!
Now that I'm finished on my little ranting spree, wonderful chapter. I'm excited to know what Malfoy (aka - ferret)'s got up his sleeve and why is Harry getting this really bad pain? Voldemort??? Now that'd be shocking...jk.
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!Author's Response: Thank you, and I will be true to my word. Check back later on to find out, thanks again Dreamer! Report Review
I'll read your other story as soon as I say this. These are very fluffy and mushy but they're cute and funny! Ron was great and Jamie's character is soo cute! Want to see more, k? Thanks!Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I've gotten so many reviews about these that I'm definitely planning to write more. And here I didn't think anyone would even actually read them, lol!! Report Review
For a moment? Those words scare me...really. I'm glad you updated! Truly amazing chapter, of course. I like being able to see into their minds - always a good thing. Update soon! Report Review
I started reading this story before I went away and I just finished this latest chapter - pretty great so far! I like how you incorporated Merlin into the story - very creative. I like his character - and I can totally picture him. I hope to see more soon!Author's Response: Thank you, it means a lot to hear words of encouragement. I am nearly finished with the next installment, so check back soon. Thanks again! Report Review
All right, all of you? Why is it that NO ONE has reviewed? Are you all crazy? This is great! I love it! So going on my favourites list - right NOW! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Report Review
Don't worry, you're not the biggest perv alive - some boys in I know are 800 times worse. You didn't put them...hem, hem...doing anything on the first night - you clear my list of pervs! But it's an awesome story! Keep it going! Report Review
I did enjoy it, Froggy1. I thought it to be very interesting - a bit like J.K. in a sense - starting during the summer. Don't update too fast though - I would love to read more of this, but I can't tonight - it's nearly midnight and I've been up for eighteen hours already - there's now way I'm staying up much later tonight. But I'll try to catch up soon! Awesome start - or, as you're on something like the 24th chapter if my sight is working well - great job! Even if I haven't read all that yet...shutting up for once! Ttyl, DreamerGirlAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review and I do hope that you can catch up since I have now posted chapters up 32. I don't see it but you are like the 20th person who has siad that my story is like JK would write. Thank you for the great complemnet Report Review
Told you I would read!!! And I did!!!! And it was awesome!!!!! I'm in love with this story!!!! A good bit of romance is always good! Update soon, kay? Cuz I totally love it!Author's Response: It's always great to get another author's response... I have read some of your stories as well, I really enjoyed them! Hope you enjoy the rest! Thanks! Report Review
I love it! This is really awesome but I have one comment - it might be a bit easier to read if you do one tense - past or present. A beta might be useful in that area but I love the plot sooo much! This is going on my favorites list and I'll keep checking back for more!!!
By the way, the italic thing: it's an html code. I have to do spaces or I doubt you'll be able to see the code but don't put spaces between this" < i > and then, after you want the italics to end, you put, < / i > but with no spaces! Hope you see that!~Author's Response: Oh my gosh thank you so much! You are going to laugh but it took me forever to figure that out! Thank you!! Keep reading! Report Review
This is very interesting. I like how you're not telling us exactly what's happening! Hope to read more!Author's Response: well its my first shot and i will try to make it somewhat not more confusing. thanks for the review. Report Review
Do you just enjoy cliffhangers or?????? I'm liking this a lot! Please update soon!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! Report Review
This is an amazing plot! I absolutely love it! I just have a bit of constructive critisism - I noticed that you change from 'her' to 'my' quite a bit and that gets rather confusing and also, you tend to change from past to present tense sometimes. Just thought I might mention it but I do love your story and can't wait to read more!Author's Response: ya, sorry about that, i was debating which person to write it in lol. glad you like the plot!!! Report Review
Hey! Great new chapter, I must say! You're really good at keeping the people in character, like Snape's comment on 'there is a Slytherin running around pulling pranks with a Gryfinndor?' I thought that was quite good. I could just picture the old guy's face!
But you said you needed a beta: replying to that as well!!!!!! email me at firstname.lastname@example.org, okay? ttyl! keep writing! Report Review
Really, I can deal without the cookie, thanks to my sister, I am really tired of them but that was pretty cool. I like how you're leading us on...see I can never do that. For me, it's just right in there but I like reading something that is seriously making me absolutely need more. This is really cool! Post more soon!Author's Response: Thank you! I love it when people review:D Report Review
Yeah, you just can't end it like that!!!!!!!! This has got to be the best thing I've ever read. Well, I was looking for a little fluff to get me to sleep but then I read this, refused to take my eyes of the screen for however the hel* long I've been reading this and now am completely awake again!!!! lol. So on my fav list....MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you couldn't take your eyes from the screen, not because I'm evil or anything, well okay, yes I am evil but still, I'm just glad you liked it that's all. Keep reading, I'm hoping the next chapter will be finished soon. Darn writer's block.
~Tina~ Report Review
Well, this is very interesting. And no one has reviewed on it? Outrageous!!!! Well, from my personal point of view, you are not only an incredible writer but one with a good idea - Girls Rule!!! lol. Seriously, I started reading this a few minutes ago and I am very impressed. Usually, I wait until the last chapter posted to review but I feel this one couldn't wait! Going to read more now....Great job!!!!!
DreamerGirlAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I though no one liked it. I'm new so your, my first review at this site. Thanks for taking the time to read my fic. Report Review
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