:| WHOAH. okay okay.. Im not a fan of Lily and Peter much, because I like the thought of Lily and James Potter being well... perfect, but that was just wonderful! Keep it up! ^_^Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! Ye Report Review
=)) OMG! So cute and funny! poor James, though, haha!Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :) Report Review
That was sweet... really cute, I loved it, it was short, and simple, but it's just.. really... well... wow. :DAuthor's Response: Thanks very much! I tried making it a bit longer but it just got dumb. So it's short :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
well, that was.. -Interesting -Funny (VERY) -Cute -AND sweet -mildly.. weird, I guess :) all in all, it was a cute story :D I liked it! Author's Response: I'm glad you found it funny, interesting, cute, sweet and weird (I think) :) Report Review
OMG! what happened to Narcissa??? Draco didn't hurt her did he???!! Is Draco evil again???!! noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!Author's Response: *evil laughter* I won't tell :P Report Review
:) okay, number one, it was a lovely plot, REALLY original, But I think it's kinda cheesy how Hermine keeps saying, "I guess I could just send you an owl later on in the break, so I can tell you how I really feel, okay?" I mean, when u like sum1, it's really a matter of now or never!! and u don't really jst suddenly owl them saying, "Hey, I just found out that I love you!!" I REALLY wish u won't take this criticism the wrong way, coz I'm REALLY just trying to help, okay??? (BTW it was cool how Harry, Ron and Draco keep avoiding hermione from leaving that compartment, LOL{See, I DO have nice things to say!!}) Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! I just wanted to say that I understand where you're coming from. I already have the next chapter on another site, and that chapter sort of clears up everything Hermione is saying. When I post that chapter on hpff it should make more sense :) _Brianna_ Report Review
:) it was cute, but why is James calling Lily "Evens"? isn't it "Evans"? Report Review
ooooooooooh... it was cool... :)Author's Response: Well thank you your review and chapter 4 is in waiting. Report Review
OMG!! It's soooooooooo cool!! u definetely got me hooked!! Please UPDATE!!!Author's Response: i will, soon! lol Report Review
Cool :) ur a great author!! :D Report Review
It was good!! didn't suck, not at all! Keep it up!!Author's Response: Aww? Really? Thanks!!! Mwah! Report Review
It was nice, brilliant! actually, but... it's REALLY (I mean the stroy) is worked out from Kelly Clarkson's song, because of you, right?? but I loved it anyway! Author's Response: aw well thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. and yes it's from that song. thanks again! Report Review
That was cool!! No offence to Ron or anything, but it serves him right! being such a jerk to Hermione! But it was brilliant! keep it up!Author's Response: Hehee Thanks! Yeah I admit that in LBB I did make Ron seem like a prick ^__^ Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
:) hey! remeber me?! U reviewed me, and I saw u wrote D/Hr fics as well! So I decided to check it out, it was really cool! especially the way Draco kept repeating he'd hex Pansy all the way to russia! LOL BTW it was great!! :D UPDATE!!Author's Response: I will be updating this fic as soon as chapter 2 has been validated on my other fic. I am really glad you like it. The bit about cursing Pansy to Russia seems to be everyone fav bit. Thanx so much for your review. Report Review
OMG!! (hey cool, I'm the first person to review u!!) But anyways... where was I?? oh yeah, OMG!! firstly I thought they didn't HAVE any wands, how did malfoy get his then? second, It was awsome, BTW, and third of all, ur a great author!! But y did u kill Hermione?? :( oh well :)Author's Response: well you see, (oh and thanks for the first review! yay!) malfoy got his wand because *whispers* it doesnt say, but snape (in this story) is working for the dark lord also, and did not take dracos wand away. :-) thanks for saying it was awesome. this story has been a long time coming *whew*. lol. anyway! thanks for the review! i appreciate it! Report Review
hahahhahaha!! that was jst funny!! Report Review
Aaaaaah!!!!!!!!! Come on!! don't torture people like this!!! STOP THE CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!! they're EVIL!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Hahahaha! They're evil just like me... I promise you that all the chapters won't end with cliffhangers... just go and read chapter 3 for example ;) Report Review
Wow, PLEASE UPDATE!!! :) Report Review
:) awww..... thats so nice.... :D it would have been better if Voldemort didn't exist.... :) Report Review
hahahahahhaahh!! I think both, but anyway.. good job!! and it is kinda... gross to think of Harry and Ron doing... uh! eeeeew.... forget i ever mentioned that!! Report Review
IT"S GREAT!!! you have no dea how long I waited for this sequel!!! :D it's finally here!!! Okay, sorry, I'm getting over-enthusiasthic... sorry.... PLEASE UPDATE!!Author's Response: It's ok :D I'm just glad that you're happy and over-enthusiasthic :D I'll update asap Report Review
hahahahhahahha!! that was funny, and kinda sweet at d same time... :D Report Review
cool... But it says one-shot... it sin't a one shot... right?Author's Response: nope it's not.. lol... thanx for reviewing!!! ") Report Review
oooooooooooh... cool!! :D UPDATE! Please!! Report Review
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