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Review #1, by dstrbdpark1987Kings and Queens: The first Lesson

12th March 2007:
Again, I think it's a very good idea. Your story was very nice and I liked it, but I can not stress enough that you spell check. If you go back over your story I'm sure you will find words that were spelled wrong that can easily be fixed and that will make your story 10 times better. And never rush a story.

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Review #2, by dstrbdpark1987I love her, she loves him and he loves her: I love her, she loves him and he loves her

12th March 2007:
Hey, I liked your story, it was very interesting. But you might want to spell check it a little better before you posted it. I noticed a few misspelled words (and I know I'm not that great of a speller my self so my friend spell checks everything for me lol) And that was a great twist with the story being from the Remus's point of view, very unexpected. Good luck on future storys.

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Review #3, by dstrbdpark1987The Baby's Coming!: Homecoming

22nd March 2006:
Not a bad story for it being your first. I wish it could have been a little bit longer though, I thought it was very funny! Good job.

Author's Response: thanks!

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Review #4, by dstrbdpark1987once upon a valentine's day: once upon a valentine's day

5th November 2005:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWW!! That story was very cute! I SO love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I like cute! fluffy fiction has its place once more in the world...thanks for appreciating it! :)

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