Wow, great story. I liked how Lily got really mad at Peter in her head. I also liked how James explained baout the Fediluus Charm. The dmeontors looking in was ery.
Good StoryAuthor's Response: Why thank you ^_^ lol yeah about the Fidelius Charm...I've always wondered about that and so I felt that I should include how it worked in the story. But anyway, I'm glad you liked my story! Report Review
It's good. I liked the way you told about how Peter manipulated alkl hisfriends into thinking they were spys and whatn ot. I doubt Peter woiuld be that clever though. I hate Peter.Author's Response: I hate Peter too!! lol... I personally think he WAS clever. He had to make sure noone suspected him, and his friends were very clever, so he had to be smart to outwit them, don't you agree? Plus, he had turned a spy for Voldemort one year before the Potter's death, and noone had realised it: I think this proves that he wasn't an idiot, or a coward as he is usually portrayed :) But, of course, this is my personal opinion!
Thank you for reading and reviewing :D Report Review
Pretty good. I don't particualarly like songfics but this wasn't bad at all.
Good job.Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Report Review
Wow. It was great. I liked how Hagrid got to kill Malfoy. And how you described the Infrai. That was creepy.
Good Story.Author's Response: thanks Crispey. One of my fav moments were the entrance of the Infiri, i wanted to show chaos. yep, for all those years of being called an oaf by his son Hagrd gets to punish him lol. thanks again :) Report Review
FUNNY! Sorry for the somewhat selayed reveiw, It was good. I liked how the apple was named Harry. I'm guessing this was post HBP becasue dof the Ginny/Harry stuff. What is that spell? "blandus"
I liked it. It was good.Author's Response: Yup, post HBP. Blandus is a spell that makes the victim fall in love with the first thing they see. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Wow. That's pretty dark. Good Story. Lucius seemed genuinely sincere. Voldemort is mean.Author's Response: I'm really happy that you liked the story, Crispey! Yes, Lucius was genuinely sincere with Narcissa despite his outer facade. Thank you for the review!!! ~Jessi Report Review
Funny. Good Story. Liked the different words for real things. "VTs" Great.Author's Response: Thanks :) Report Review
Pretty good. I liked how you told the OotP from the order's perspective. Not a bad first chapter. Report Review
Not bad. I liked how you added a sentence or two of humor in even the more serious parts. I also liked Remus's point of view. I hadn't read many like that.Author's Response: Thank'ee for the review, Crispey. Report Review
Very Nice.Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Nice Job.Author's Response: thanks Report Review
Not Bad At All. Report Review
Funny Jeff.Author's Response: Mmhm, interesting's the word. Report Review
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