I absolutely loved this chapter!
It was great!
I think this is one of my favourite stories on HPFF.
It draws you in so much and you really care about Suzie.
xxxAuthor's Response: thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I'm glad you care about Suzie. The thought of not writing her anymore (seeing as I'm almost done) makes me feel a little sad. :/ Report Review
Oh wow, i really liked this chapter. ACE!
I love the whole Sirius hate thing going on. This is so refreshing to read rather than the usual Sirius/OC stories that all have similar storylines. Brilliant!
Update soon pls.
Alice. xxx Report Review
OhMyGosh I loved this chapter!
I really like the way Sirius (and Adelais) always seem to turn up in the most unexpected situations.
Really really great, you're a very talented writer.
Please Update soon,
Alice xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you sooo much! Haha yeah, what are the chances, ey ;) Whoooosh thanks sooo much hun, that is like the utmost compliment to me hehe *hugs* I'll update asap! Report Review
Ooooh i really like this story. Its a lot different to all the others. cant wait for the next chapter. xxx Report Review
I love this story!!!
Its completely great how you've planned it out. So different to the normal Sirius/OC stories.
I absolutely love Dollie, your writing is amazing, it makes you really feel for her when shes on the broom.
Great story, update soon pls,
Alice xxx Author's Response: Aaaaawww!!! I'm blushing, thank you!
Thanks for appreciating my hard work! I'm glad it stands out from the other Sirius/OC/Remus stories!
Yay! I like Dollie too! Thrilled that you don't think she's too mary-sueish and that you can connect with her!
I'll update as soons as I can!
~Misty Report Review
aaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! ther finally together!!!
please update soon.
Alice xxxAuthor's Response: glad you loved it! next chapter coming soon, i promise!!! keep reading Report Review
Ahhhh! I love this story soo much!
I think you should definitely keep Ashley in for a bit longer.
Great chapter! Update soon.
Alice xAuthor's Response: Aww thanks! So you think I should keep Ashley in, huh? Well thanks for lettin' me know =P And thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Aw wow. I loved this chapter. I can't wait to find out what'll happen next. Update soon xxxAuthor's Response: I'll be sure to get the next chapter out soon. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
WOW! This story is soooo good. Its only two chapters in and I'm already feeling emotionally sympathetic to Rose. I really like the difference of the main character to other sirius/oc fics which usually have the girl as popular, incredibly beautiful, lily evans best friend, in a group mirroring the 'marauders' etc, whereas in this one she is an outcast and...alternative, kinda antisocial (even though she says shes not lol). It shows how inventive it is, very unique, the added sarcasm/cynicism that is written in Rose's point of view makes the story more interesting too, as its got humor as well as the drama and romance; which is soon to come. The characters have also developed brilliantly already using hints in their dialogue instead of boring tedious description about their appearance/personality. And the Sirius in the story seems to have the traits you would guess a young Sirius would have, you haven't adapted his original character to make it a typical sirius/oc fic. Brilliant plot, writing style etc. Please carry this story on, I've added it to my favourites. Update soon, Ally x x x ps. sorry for the essay sized review, but this is the first story that I actually fell in love with after the first couple of characters!Author's Response: Wow! You've picked up on stuff I never knew was in there! I'll try an get the next chapter up as soon as possible :) Report Review
This is a really good beginning chapter. The characters seem really intriguing. Can't wait to read more, update soon, Ally x x Author's Response: Thank you. You will see each of the charactors in different lights as the story goes. Keep Reading! Report Review
Hey, I have emo tendencies and I still found this story friggin hilarious. Best humor fic I've read yet, I really hope you'll carry on, I've added it to my favourites. There's no point in people being so serious, I can take the piss out of my emo-ishness, I hope no one has been offended because truthfully this story rocks too much for flames. Anyway, UPDATE!!! Ally xxxAuthor's Response: Glad for your support! I'll be updating soon. Report Review
LMAO. This chapter was H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S! hehe, t'was incredibly funny and great writing style. Loved the drunk Ami, what a hoot!! And Terry, the *******. Update soon, I can't wait to know what happens next, Ally x.Author's Response: LMAO! Thanks. It's funny, yes, but serious things happened... and drunkeness just made them... less serious and more funny, lol. The point of this chapter was to.. kinda... kick Terry around on the big picture, but he's not out --- yet. BIG yet, there. Chapter 20 is underway, but I'm working on a ficcentral story chapter right now. Report Review
This chapter was soooo good. Update soonAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunch! I promise there's definitely more. ;) Report Review
LMAO. This story is amazingly funny. I was laughing so much. Really great format using letters, notes, detention slips etc. I've added this to my favourites, keep up the good work. Report Review
This is a really good start. I'm already loving the main character, and the plot seems very good. Update soonAuthor's Response: woo hoo thanks for the review!! the next chap is waiting to be validated. thanks again! Report Review
GAH!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. Mucho compliments to the wonderful author, this story always brightens my day, reading about paige is just like reading about my life lol. Really good chapter, Sirius and Paige HAVE to get together!!! Still my favouritest story, update soon before I go CrAzY!!! Ally x x xAuthor's Response: compliments are happily received :) so happy that its your favouritest Report Review
Lmao. This is chapter is one of the funniest I have ever read. So funny, she hit him with a quill lol. Please update soon, I get even more and more hooked on this story, it is slowly taking over my life. Gah. Ally xx Author's Response: hahaha its awesome that you think its the funniest and i'm sorry i've gotten you hooked, or am i? Report Review
This story completely rocks!!! It's so complicated and very well put together and written. Amazing how you have interpreted all your own ideas to follow the real story. Brilliant. Please update soon, Ally x xAuthor's Response: =D Allrighty! Report Review
AAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!! This chapter was so good. Amazingly written, I can't wait for the next one, as always, your loyal fan, allyAuthor's Response: Aww... *feels special* Report Review
This story is so good!!!! I absolutely love it, I can't believe its gonna end soon. Great plot and writing, but evil cliffhangers. Update soon, your loyal fan lol, Ally x x Author's Response: Such loyalty... *sniff*
Next chapter should be up in an hour or so. Report Review
AAARRRGHHHH!!! WHAT DOES THE NOTE SAY?? WHAT DOES THE NOTE SAY?? I am officially hooked, even bordering on obsession. I was actually shouting at my computer screen at the end of this chapter!!! Awesome story and the best cliffhanger i have read in ages!!!! Please update soon. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! Save me from insanity...Author's Response: All will be revealed next time...He he! Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
This is a really good story. And very unpredictable. Update soon x x xAuthor's Response: Oh, I plan on keeping it unpredictable ::mischievous grin:: Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
YAY!!!! U updated!!! I've been waiting for ages!!! Still my favourite story!!! This chapter was really cool, even if it was a bit sad...evil horrible mother!!! But Paige is rich!!! Wohoo. Update really soon, I'll need another 'Paige's weird humor' fix and quick. Hmm, now I want pizza...*stomach grumbles*Author's Response: mmmm pizza, I love your enthusiasm thank you so much for that review Report Review
Lol. This sounds like its gonna be a funny story. James stealing Lily's underwear...someone's a little desperate. Update soon, really good first chapter and your banner is wicked. x x x Author's Response: Yes, my banner is the greatest! *Shakes head* I know - talk about extreme! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Right now this is my favourite story on this site, i love it so much!!!!!!! Every time I log in, i check to see if it has been updated, i think I'm slightly obsessed. It's really different from all the other 'marauder era' stories, and Paige reminds me of me, wohoo, finally a character to relate to. Yipee!! back to the story, UPDATE VERY SOON OR MY MIND WILL FRAZZLE!!! Yes, I defintely am very much obsessed. Brilliant. Author's Response: aww, that made my day, thank you for taking the time to leave such an awesome review. Report Review
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