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Reading Reviews From Member: LilyPotterEvans1976
  
365 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: The Legion (Prologue Part 2)

7th September 2017:
awww *sniff* that was beautiful, i think it needs at least one more chapter though, the fight with moldy shorts, and Harry and Hermione finally kissing, or something... but other than that i love this story, very captivating xx

Author's Response: Thanks, and thanks for all your reviews. It was probably a mistake but I deliberately avoided the final battle in this story. But you're right. Definitely should have made more of their final parting. Thanks again.

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Review #2, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Return

7th September 2017:
How could Hermione ever repay Harry for saving her parents, that was a beautiful chapter, i'm so happy they are alive and reunited, makes my heart happy :)

Author's Response: Thanks. It worked out in the end despite Harry's recklessness. Thanks again.

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Review #3, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Hedwig Returns

6th September 2017:
ohhh what does he find... i'm glad he frees Hagrid yay, good going Harry

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, Hagrid is important to Harry so he would have been targeted too. Thanks again.

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Review #4, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: The Test

6th September 2017:
i don't like the sound of this unfeeling Harry, i feel the dementor has tricked him in some way, not good at all

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, but being Harry it probably won't be permanent. Thanks again.

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Review #5, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Taken

6th September 2017:
Awww poor Mione... i'm bloody crying here, what a thing to happen, just want to give her a huge hug...my girl

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, very sad. Thanks again.

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Review #6, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Ron the Spy

6th September 2017:
im happy the boys made up, i still think Rons a git though

Author's Response: Thanks. Ha! And this time Harry was a bit stupid not to want to listen. Thanks again.

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Review #7, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Mrs Figg’s

6th September 2017:
i never thought i would read a story with 'inteligent' dementors...this is really good xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Well, it was an idea worth exploring. Thanks again.

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Review #8, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Obsessions

6th September 2017:
someone in her family has been killed??? her parents??? poor mione xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Well, it isn't entirely clear what happened yet. Thanks again.

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Review #9, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Fudge

6th September 2017:
Interesting, very interesting xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, I thought Fudge would want to do the right thing and help Harry. Thanks again.

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Review #10, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: A Personal Invitation

6th September 2017:
Ron is a git, but he is right, Hermione did dump him for Harry, and rightly so, he is the best choice for her... good stuff xx

Author's Response: Thanks. Well, Ron may regret his insensitive words. Thanks again.

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Review #11, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Inept

6th September 2017:
She is in love with you Harry, what is so difficult to see...but she's scared to tell you... so sweet, love it xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Ha!

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Review #12, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: The Index

6th September 2017:
interesting, the plot thickens... love it xx

Author's Response: Thanks. yes, indeed! Thanks again.

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Review #13, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Scruffy Urchin

6th September 2017:
ohhh very interesting, i like it a lot, this story is fasinating 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks. Harry was too pleased to see her and should perhaps have questioned Hermione's earlier than anticipated arrival. Thanks again.

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Review #14, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Hungry, Were You?

6th September 2017:
That was a nice scene with Harry and his aunt, i feel they bonded a little, very nice xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, I thought Harry and Petunia would make things up in the end. Thanks again.

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Review #15, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Two Memories?

6th September 2017:
hmmm, interesting, if she had the memory on her already, what was with the spell...was she confunded? interesting... must read more xx

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, I thought Dumbledore would have anticipated something happening before he had the chance to tell Harry everything and security would be a problem. Thanks again.

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Review #16, by LilyPotterEvans1976Legacy: Gringotts (Prologue Part 1)

6th September 2017:
I like it, interesting start, loving the whole bromance with the boys... 10/10 x

Author's Response: Thanks. Ha! Well, it was important to show they remained friends despite the events of the summer. Thanks again.

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Review #17, by LilyPotterEvans1976Masks: It's going down

6th August 2017:
Oh i'm so pleased that Ginny is ok, and finally that Parkinson brat is done with...never liked her... awesome chapter...is there any more, please update soon if there is xxx

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Review #18, by LilyPotterEvans1976Masks: Before the Storm

5th August 2017:
Wow, jam-packed chapter, i'm pleased everyone was ok with Draco and Ginny being married... still seems weird them two being wed, loved it, nice one xxx

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Review #19, by LilyPotterEvans1976Masks: Time To Breathe

31st July 2017:
Draco Malfoy giving Harry Potter relationship advice??? NEVER in a million years would ever have thought i'd read that, but at least it woke Harry up, and pulled him out of his doom and gloom, nice one Draco, nice one bud xx

Author's Response: thank you so much for all of your reviews im glad you're enjoying it =) and Vena is a character from a hp roleplay i once did, i won't say if shes trustworthy or not yet =)

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Review #20, by LilyPotterEvans1976Masks: The C Team

31st July 2017:
Not sure i trust this Vena, she seems suspicious, good chapter, onto the rest

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Review #21, by LilyPotterEvans1976Masks: Its a freaking castle!

31st July 2017:
good chapter, like the descrip of the castle, sounds homely

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Review #22, by LilyPotterEvans1976Masks: A Day off?

31st July 2017:
Oh no, this is bad, really bad, Draco killed Kingsley, oh no, i feel bad for him now

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Review #23, by LilyPotterEvans1976Masks: The Pheonixs

31st July 2017:
ohhh, action packed, loved the spell scene, very cute, and this Jesse sounds like a fun person to be around hehe loved it xx

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Review #24, by LilyPotterEvans1976Masks: Where they belong

31st July 2017:
Awweee i'm happy he survived...and Lavender too, and i'm happy they made up, awww so sweet xxx

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Review #25, by LilyPotterEvans1976Masks: Adjustments

30th July 2017:
aww poor Luna, i hope she succeeds in her training. I got a bad feeling about this mission Draco is going on too, something bad is going to happen xx

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