Reading Reviews From Member: Kained but Able
  
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Review #1, by Kained but AbleHarry Potter and the Hidden Horcruxes: Godric's Hollow

10th October 2005:
Whilst you seem to jump through the narrative very quickly - that actual story you are telling is a good one! Try giving us more info on the characters emotions and feelings. Well done - Kained

Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review! This is my first story, so I'm trying to work out the kinks. I'll try harder to give more information on emotions and feelings. Again, thank you for your review, I had never thought about character's emotions.

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Review #2, by Kained but AbleHarry Potter and the Girl Who Lived: The Deepest of Scars

10th October 2005:
This is interesting stuff. Keep it up because I'd like to follow this and see where it goes.

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Review #3, by Kained but AbleA Thunderous Rain: A Thunderous Rain

10th October 2005:
This is a realy unique piece well done! Love the constant metaphor of the rain and water supposedly bringing new life. Great stuff!

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Review #4, by Kained but AbleContentions: Born Contenders

9th October 2005:
Well done. This is an imaginative and confident opening. keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for the glowing review :) The next chapter should be out in the very near future. (unless ofcourse my computer breaks, I get struck by lightning, etc.) It's just that I'm hoping to bring in a pethra of new fanfics, so I may be delayed. O_o

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Review #5, by Kained but AbleHarry Potter The Next Generation: The Potter People

28th September 2005:
Well done on all the new characters! My My Harry and Ginny have been busy - 8 kids!! Keep writing :)

Author's Response: Thank you! the next chapter will be validated soon so keep your eyes peeled! Oh and i agree but i couldn't help it. he never had a family before and by having lots of kids he pretty much ensured that that would never happen to one of his 9 kids... and ideas for kids kept popping into my head. Any way its great to have positive responses!

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Review #6, by Kained but AbleHarry Potter The Next Generation: Meet the Weasleys

28th September 2005:
This first chapter was enjoyable! I bet it wad difficult introducing so many new characters at once but you've done well! Going to read part 2 now - cant wait to meet the old version of Harry :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest as it appears!

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