That was darling. It was a wonderful moment between them, and very unexpected. Is there another chapter? I hope so - I've been really enjoying this.

Update soon.

Paloma

Author's Response: thank you! yes, the next chapter is written :)

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I'm enjoying the Slytherins - I never thought I'd EVER hear myself say that!

I hope you get the opportunity to update soon. It's a great read so far.

Paloma

Author's Response: I quite enjoy the Slytherins myself hahaha :]
I think I have a thing for bad guys lol
I will be updating soon, I just got to review it one more time then it will go to the queue ;]
hopefully it wont take as long to get up lol

thank you for your two reviews! :]

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Oh - I like this chapter. A lot has changed. I'm still not sure what Remus is thinking about her. Off to read more.

Paloma

Author's Response: yes, this was a pretty interesting chapter.
yes, everything changes from this point on :]
actually the end of the last chapter was where everything changes, but it's basically the same point lol

thank you for reviewing!

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I'm glad they've finally taken this time to talk it all out. The final line was a revelation, and I'm sure Sirius is as confused as I am in this moment.

Great chapter. Hope you get the chance to update soon.

Paloma

Author's Response: Yep, they need to talk through this and sort everything out. I know, it's confusing, but everything will be revealed in a couple of chapters.
Thanks for the review!
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I thought this first song worked really well with the chapter. Good choice. Off to read more.

PP

Author's Response: Dear Paloma Patil,
DO you know of anyone that could make a banner for another one of my stories? Please let me know, so that I can contact them! Also, I'm glad that you liked it!
Love,
Maggie Frace

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Very cute. I'm glad Sirius and MJ made up - they are so much better when they are friends.

Oh - typo alert (in the first line): "Teacher’s Longue" should be "Teachers' Lounge", of course.

I thought Lily was a riot in this chapter. Your characterization of her makes me smile.

Well done - update soon!

Paloma

Author's Response: Hey again Paloma! Thanks for reviewing so wonderfully again; it makes me smile to read what you say! Also, thanks for catching the typo. For some reason I always spell "lounge" and "tongue" the way the other is supposed to be. My bad.

I'm glad you liked Lily. I feel like she's been off doing her own thing for a while, and I wanted to bring her back. When she's in my story, she's usually listening or off with Sev. I think the way she acts with him or while she's comforting her friends is very different than the way she acts normally. I'm planning to write Lily in as a bigger character. Glad you like her so far!

Sorry my next chapter is so late. I promise it will be up as soon as it gets through the queue!

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Great chapter.

Good luck on your A-levels!

PP

Author's Response: Thank you! They've over now until June, which is a relief. So there'll be plenty of updates :D Thanks again for reviewing.

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I guess it's no surprise that she feels regret - she really didn't need to be so cruel.

PP

Author's Response: yes-I feel bad for James some time in that regard. thanks for the review!

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Good chapter. It established some of the growing friendships, and showed how Tonks was becoming a fixture at Grimmauld place.

Oh - I'm pretty sure "werewolfism" isn't a word, but there is a word for suffering from being a werewolf - it is "lycanthropy". Hope that helps.

PP

Author's Response: I like werewolfism better though ;]
It's much more casual, but I'll get into it later.
Thanks a million fo' the review.

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Oh - that was a sweet moment in the closet. I'm glad Harry explained about Remus - otherwise she might have felt rejected by him.

Well done.

PP

Author's Response: The closet scene is the reason I started writing this story ;]

I feel that Harry is stupid in the canon series - No offense; I love him all the same, but I feel like he is an observant and insightful person.

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They are my favorite pair. It's cute that you've imagined an instant attraction between them.

Typo alert: 'So they loose control and turn into a savage beast once a month...' It should be "lose" control.

Off to read more.

Paloma

Author's Response: I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, Remus & Tonks, obviously xD

Oooh, I'll go back and change that... If I can ever remember to.

Thanks so much!


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I knew I didn't like Andrew. What a scumbag.

Author's Response: Me neither. Thanks for the review!

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That was really sweet - the last line broke my heart, though.

Off to read more.

PP

Author's Response: I know, I like to bring in a few lines like that :P Thanks for the review!

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I liked Lily's POV - and her revelation about her feelings for James. Great chapter.

PP

Author's Response: Haha, thanks again for another great review!

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The diary will be a good plot device, since we'll be able to see Elle piecing together her past.

Remus was darling in this chapter! Yay - Team Remus!

PP

Author's Response: Remus is pretty freakin' amazing :) Thanks for the review!

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Oh - I'm not liking Andrew right now - nothing personal against him - I'm just rooting for Remus.

The 'naughty noises' were hilarious...and a bit creepy - LOL.

PP

Author's Response: I don't like Andrew either, don't worry. Thanks for the review!

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My favorite line had to be: " James was in love with a flower? Well, that's...creepy." Hilarious!

PP

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I quite like that line as well. Thanks for the review!

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Cute chapter. Her amnesia is odd - I'm surprised she can speak at all, considering how many objects she doesn't know the name of.

Team Remus - he seems drawn to her, and he's adorable.

I hope I get a chance to read more.

PP

Author's Response: I LOVE Remus. Like, seriously LOVE him. Just thought I'd let you know. And thanks for the review!

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Poor girl - that's a lot to try to absorb. Her amnesia is a great way of doing the initial exposition of this chapter.

Well done - off to read more.

PP

Author's Response: Aww, well I'm glad you like it and thanks for the review!

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Fine work, Christine! I loved the ending. I knew it had to be up to Lily! I knew James would respect her wishes (and the bet!) You didn't disappoint - well done.

I'm excited to read your next story. Post soon!

Paloma

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God - that was a terrible experience with invisibility! Poor Marlene. (I'm beginning to think that having the cloak on in bed is going to cause some problems at the beginning of the next chapter.)

Update soon!

Paloma Patil

Author's Response: Hey Paloma! Thanks for the review! The invisibility cloak is usually glorified as this beautiful thing, and it can be, but I think it can cause a lot of problems too. I feel like the phrase "Poor Marlene" has been pretty common in my reviews. Looking back on it, maybe I have been too harsh on her lately. :-( That will just have to be remedied soon. Thanks again for the review! I will update tomorrow!

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Pure evil is right. I'm not fond of Evan at all, and my heart is breaking for Lupin right now!

I hope you get the chance to update soon.

PP

Author's Response: pahaha sorry!
And I think you're fondness for Evan is about to decrease ten-fold in the next chapter.
And you know what? I know I'm writing this, but even I feel really sorry for Remus, he just likes Callie so much and yet there are so many obstacles in his way
An update is coming, I have already written the next chapter
thanks so much for the review
xxx

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I liked the final line. You could feel her elation - no wonder she felt relieved, eh?

Good story.

PP

Author's Response: thanks so much!
will update ASAP.
x

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I liked Saffron's chapter, but not as much as I liked Cal's. She makes me smile. (I'm a big Remus fan, so any character who sees how special he is works for me.)

PP

Author's Response: thanks!
haha i am actually the writer behind cal, and this chapter is by my sister. kay is our best friend.
i love remus too. :)
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I like this change in perspective. Poor Kayla - it was awkward being asked out by Peter, eh?

Good chapter!

Paloma

Author's Response: hahahha thanks so much for reviewing,
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