so i actually really like this story... doesn't happen often with sirius/oc's... keep it up :) remember to keep original! :) Report Review
BONJOUR! Rad story so far, I liked the Sirius/Puppy Dog Eyes part, it was super cute! Update soon, I'll keep reading!Author's Response: Ahhh!!! thanks for reviewing. I will update asap like probably later tonight. Thakyou hugely for reading!
Cyber-hugs and imaginary ponies!
Sparkle x Report Review
aghpaigklaejghldg Very nice, can;t wait for the next update!
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OH MY GOD!!! FINALLY!!! Lol, I've been waiting for the big bang, and you've done it absurdly well!Author's Response: Hahaha, I like that -- the "big bang" :D Thank you so much! Report Review
OH MY GOD! AND UNUSUAL SIRIUS/OC FIC! Holy crappo, I actually HAVEN'T really read this same situation playing out in another fic! Congrats, you should be mega proud! And please, PLEASE continue with this, because it's made me excited!Author's Response: Yeah, I've never read anything like this either. However, I don't really know how probable something like this is. It's not, really, but it's definitely something fun to write, even if it's a bit out there. Haha. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. =] Report Review
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Yay, update!!! Woot! It's so goood! Ugh, for real, though, that Jordan really gets on my nerves. But if it's her fault Sirius and Ar finally get together, then so be itt!! Report Review
Oh! I was totally just thinking about your story, and I came to a super-conclusion - is Cassion the boy who's set to take the Eastern throne? As in like, he and Bella are still alive, and it's a total farce that her dad finally had a son, and, uh, he's really so keen on hiding info on him and Bella simply because he wants Cass to take thr throne?
Did that make any sense? Yeah. I was totally just spacing out, and I had just read this chapter, and yeah.
;)) But anyways, seriously, this is THE best peice of fanfiction I've ever read. And, if you want my opinion as a loyal reader, then I'll say this: I REALLY want Sirius to get happy, know what I'm saying? Like, I'm so bitter about the way life played out for him in cannon, it's the biggest drag EVER.
That man lived in flipping HELL, and it makes me sad. It seriously makes me pout. As in, I'm totally pouting right now as I type. Wah.
So, I think that might be why I dig your story so much - because you show us mega super awesomely happy times in Sirius' life. And, at the same time, he's still kind of living in hell.
But anyways, yeah, great job writing, and I'm totally excited for the next chapter!
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Woot! Good job, Your Sirius is mysterious! lol Update soon!
:))Author's Response: oooh i like mysterious. that's a good thing right? thanks for the review. Report Review
This is a superrad start. very interesting, and I'm curious to see how this ends up!Author's Response: i'm curious to see, too! hahaha, idk what's going to happen yet. but thanks! Report Review
Super awesome! I like the Neely/Black Brothers interaction, very interesting.
All That Glisters is Not Gold? Shakespeare, maybe. But all I can think of is that one line from Stairway to Heaven. Which is weird, because it says "blah blah All That Glitters Is Gold".
UHH, sorry, my b. Babbling.
Anyways, good chapter, hope you update sooN!!!Author's Response: Stairway to Heaven? Is this a TV show or a soap opera? The name sounds familiar but I don't think I've watched it before :) And it's an interesting observation. I guess different people have different opinions on things. Shakespeare's just happened to match the general mood of the chapter :) Haha. Thanks for reviewing! And I definitely will update soon :) Report Review
aw, that was great! you use a lot of descriptive detail, which is awesome. i'd ask who the boy was, but the 'bark of laughter' thing leads me to believe it was indeed sirius. oh, and the fact that this is a sirius/oc fic. uh, yeah.
but anyways, awesome start, and i'll hope you'll write more soon!
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that was nice. and that's usually the way i start my mornings, too.
update soon!Author's Response: ahahah, thank you for the comment(; Report Review
.r.a.d.n.e.s.s. r.a.d.n.e.s.s.Author's Response: Errr thanks? :D Report Review
whoa, that was exhiloratingly unique!Author's Response: woah thanks o:
love your stories, btw. Report Review
"I can practically hear the house elves whisper “Because you’re worth it”. "
SOO GODAuthor's Response: I'm glad you think so!
Thanks for reviewing :)
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Please...? Report Review
This one's rad too. except the part where remus was talking to darcy really confused me. but overall, funny chapter! Update sooon!
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This story's great - i dig the sarcasm, lol. Report Review
rad.Author's Response: haha, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it!
prongs_lives_on78 Report Review
that was reaaly super awesome.Author's Response: thank you! i hope you keep reading! Report Review
oh my god, i flipping laughed so hard. then i cried. this was awesome. and so funny. and i really wish this were cannon, and not a fanfic. really.Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much sirius_jamie for the compliment - 'i really wish this were cannon, and not a fanfic. really.' That is one of the nicest reviews I think I've ever had. To not only provide ten minutes of reading enjoyment to some readers but to inspire such an invested interest in the characters is something I never expected to achieve. So, thank you so much; I hope you like what I have to come :) Report Review
Oh, I totally dig this story. And I like the dishevelled Sirius part, that was awesome.
Your version of James+Lily's Relationship: A+! Wicked awesome.Author's Response: Oh gosh, you're too kind! I'm so glad someone is enjoying it!
And the fact that you like James/Lily's relationship makes me feel so much better. I have been kinda annoyed with it lately... but you have put me in better spirits. Thank you!!
wowowowowowowowowowowoooaaah. Report Review
oh my god
woahwoahwoahwoahwoahowoahAuthor's Response: Thanks for your review ;) I take it you enjoyed the story?? Report Review
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