More, more more is all I can ask. Another great chapter!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
Again, fantastic chapter, and can't wait for the next! :DAuthor's Response: thanks! next one will be out soon Report Review
This is great, I can't wait the next chapter!Author's Response: thanks so much! Report Review
Oh dear, haha. Poor Sophie, Sirius is an idiot, I couldn't stop laughing. Report Review
Brilliant fic, I loved it, though weird I tihnk I've read it before. :) Is there a sequel, I ask? Report Review
Oooo...And the plot thickens! Can't wait for more, and keep up the brilliant writing! Report Review
Good descriptions. I lost my father too when I was younger, today's actually the anniversary of his death, it was good to read this. I can't wait to make your banner for it now. :) Good writing, keep it up.Author's Response: Thanks Jen, it felt good to write it too. I love the banner you made, it fits perfectly. You have my condolences for your father by the way...it's always hard to lose a parent. Report Review
Awww Sad! I can't wait for more! Report Review
wah...Cliff hanger. Please post more soon! :) Report Review
Woot. Love this fic so far, can't wait to see what happens next..yadda yadda of cliché reviews. I previewed this fic before but not the last section, both of which I couldn't stop reading when I started. :) Keep going please! Poor Draco..(o.O . Never thought I'd say THAT.)Author's Response: It's a one shot dear.
A one shot.
Man, my total impulse writing style seems to have worked on you! -waves fingers-
I don't know if I'll keep going, I might make another one-shot about it if I feel like it's right.
Yes, poor Draco. Gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling that I can make people empathize with him for once. Report Review
this fic was kinda confusingand hard to read at timesand you posted the same two or three chapters multiple times though I did indeed love the plot. The ending is a complete cliff hagner though, when's the sequel coming???
Author's Response: There is no sequel, I had one but then I deleted it. Report Review
this was really well written, and one of my favorite L/J fics, I ust love the ones where they're friends and Lily is another Marauder! can't wait to read more of your writing so keep up the great work!!!I loved it Report Review
hmm...this was cool, James confused and Lily screaming and yelling, it what I love most about them, it's sweet too! Report Review
intirging so far, update soon!Author's Response: Will do! :) Report Review
this is amazing for your firts one-shot, can't wait to read more of your writing!Author's Response: You're too sweet! Report Review
lol it's quite humorous but just shows how crazy one can be when thinking of the one they love, okay that was cheezy but still. Report Review
aww...sweet I actually understood how they felt and I'm just alittle confused, are they writing the letter at the same time or is James' letter a reply to Lily's? keep up your amazing way of expressing how characters feel! it's really really goodAuthor's Response: Thanks! They're writing the letters at the same time, and I guess that were both like "I LOVE YOU!" and wrote the letters. Report Review
huh...I thought this would be different, but it turned out even better than what I thought it would be! keep up the amazing writing!Author's Response: Thank you very much, I really appreciate the review! Report Review
this is an amazing original one-shot, im a huge L/J shipper and this is so humor, yet, why can't they just get together thype of fic, can't wait to read more of your writing and I especially like the last 1/3 I tihnk, from her ranting about the reasons she couldn't love him to the Ps., PPs, PPPs, and PPPPsAuthor's Response: Yeah, I know the feeling! L/J is like my bretheren, it's just so awesome! Yeah, if you want my personal opinion (or even if you don't XD) the stagboy bit is like, the best bit of the whole thing. Kinda like the meringue on the lemon meringue pie: it's all nice, of course, but the top bit is just a bit nicer, and that's why we love it! Okay, weirdest simile ever. XD Report Review
this is really great fic so far! I wonder what James' plan is though...? Update soon please! Report Review
ha, james doesn't know ow to use the Telephone! anyways...this fic is really, really great so far, update soon! Report Review
great so far, its like me and my friend ryan me running away and him stalking and chasing me arounfd trying too touch me, soo annoying! update soon please!!!!!!!!! Report Review
this is really amazing so far, update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
hmmm....this is intriging and i simply love it, update as soon as you can!!!Author's Response: Вы. Russian? Yeah, it's Russian. And I'm running out of languages! Report Review
hmmm...this is good, my own fic is one with them as best firends too as you know, and i love this one, it shows them when they were younger. Just one tiny suggestion to improve it, try to be more descriptive than mostly all dialog. :)loved it and update soon please!Author's Response: Thanks for the advice!!!! Your story is great too!!!! Anyway Updating soon!!!! Report Review
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