{reviewid: 1533126, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
25th July 2007:
Good chapter and a very interesting discussion with Dumbledore.
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{reviewid: 1533094, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
25th July 2007:
Good chapter, I think you have got Harry's feelings spot on so far.
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{reviewid: 1533083, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
25th July 2007:
A nice beginning.
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{reviewid: 1531545, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Oh Fantastic again. This is an incredible story and so well written I hope there is a new chapter soon although I would imagine that you have been doing more reading than writing at the moment?? Please update this soon I have to know what happens!!
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{reviewid: 1531526, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Excellent Wow you bought back Sirius or was this a dream?? I couldn't really tell!! Writing was fantastic and the depiction of the characters was delightful as well
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{reviewid: 1531504, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Another truly excellent chapter. This is one of the most in depth fan fictions I have ever had the pleasure of reading and it is so enjoyable and well thought out.
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{reviewid: 1531463, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Excellent but I thought Harry had to beware of Greg???
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{reviewid: 1531448, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Excellent Chapter. So well written as usual and a cracking story to go with. Some points though, How comes Neville is not involved. When are we going to find out who the Heir of Gryffindor iS?
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{reviewid: 1531436, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
o What a fantastic chapter. Love the development of James and Lily helping Harry out without permission through his dreams and of the jealous Sirius!! You really are a great writer
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{reviewid: 1531190, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Great Chapter this is developing very nicely and is completely addictive and enjoyable to read!!
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{reviewid: 1531171, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Excelllent Chapter
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{reviewid: 1531073, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
excellent
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{reviewid: 1531063, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Excellent, I loved the pace of the battle. Really well done. Non Stop action at its best
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{reviewid: 1531055, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
great chapter
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{reviewid: 1531040, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
very good what a impressive development. very original and extremely well done
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{reviewid: 1531025, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Another great chapter
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{reviewid: 1531016, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Great chapter, I like this twist with Harry What is up with him?? I can't wait to find out!!
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{reviewid: 1530961, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Fantastic chapter. I have to say I really like your Snape. He seems more real and human as he sort I guess softens towards Harry.
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{reviewid: 1530950, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Excellent chapter once again. I really like having Remus as DADA teacher as well
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{reviewid: 1530940, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
24th July 2007:
Oh fantastic chapter once again. I can see why you made the recommended story. Your writing is amazing and the development of each and every character is top quality and a joy to behold!!
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{reviewid: 1529859, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
23rd July 2007:
Great chapter
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{reviewid: 1529831, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
23rd July 2007:
Wow great chapter, nice little twist with the aura This is brilliant definetley one of my favourites I think!!
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{reviewid: 1529815, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
23rd July 2007:
Wow this I think was the best of all the chapters I have read so far. I was emotional throughout and also I couldn't help laughing and feeling soo happy as I think you displayed Harry and Nevilles feelings so well that I felt them as well. You are showing real quality with this story and I believe with your talent that this will only get better. BRAVO!!!
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{reviewid: 1529787, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
23rd July 2007:
Interesting.Who is this Jade?? This is a fantastic story
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{reviewid: 1529768, reviewer: 'darthvengeful'}
23rd July 2007:
This is so amazing. The consistency in the quality of your writing is leaving me speechless!! You are very talented Jane Potter
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