So sad! Made me tear up. I really like the idea of this story. It was very well written. The only thing that really got me was before the end of the first war, Voldemort was just Voldemort, they didn't call him he-who-must-not-be-named. Or at least that's the way I remember it. Anyway, great story. Loved it and loved the actors you chose for the banner. :D Report Review
It's so sad...I actually started writing a story like this before book seven and it wasn't nearly as good as this. I actually teared up. Beautiful.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it, and I'm sure yours was good too!
I love this story! I saw this couple the minute I read the prologue in DH. It is nice to see a Scorpius/Lily fic when so many have Scorpius/Rose fics. Can't wait for more.Author's Response: Thanks so much.
I too when reading the prologue immediately thought of Scorpius/Lily - i dont really mind Scorpius/Rose, but it gets a bit repetative and most become too Dramione for my liking.
more coming soon :D Report Review
Got a little tear! Great for your first story. Got to love Sirius. Now if we can just get him to settle down with one girl. lol.Author's Response: aw, thank you:) ive always wanted to write a story.
and yes, i love sirius and
i couldnt agree with you more♥ Report Review
OMFG! I have been reading this all night and you end it with her dead. Make me cry. Oh well, I live for these stories. Great job. 7/10Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, originally, it was Snape that killed her, but then I decided I didn't like it that way and I had to change it. Well, thank you again for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I have one word.huh? Please update soon. Report Review
I totally give this a 9/10 and adding it to my favorites. I love how you had Sirius talking to Harry at the end. I almost teared up as he talked to the casket. Brilliant Story.Author's Response: Aw thank you so much Ophelia ^_^ I appreciate that a lot ^_^ Report Review
That's it so far! AH! I need more...can't...live...without...more. Okay I'm overreacting but I am looking forward to the next chapter. :DAuthor's Response: hehehehe, glad you....liked it. lol, it's ok, i overreact when the cheese faries steal my cheese. lol, thanks for the review!!! new chappie will hopefully be out it a short time!
:o) Report Review
OMG! And here I was thinking it was going to be a happy ending...you so suck! No, I'm kidding. That was a great story! I love the fact that it was Severus that killed her b/c that just fuels the fire of their hatred for each other. Great story. Siriusly (lol). Author's Response: I like bad endings, don't ask me why, and I specifically wrote it so that Eden was the reason Sirius and Snape hated eachother so much. I think Snape hates each Marauder individually for a certain reason, and this is the story for Sirius. I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
OMG! I love this story so far. Please tell me there is more.I know school and life/work can be hectic but please tell me there is more. :D Report Review
Finally a Fred story! Good start! Can't wait for more. :DAuthor's Response: Yay for Fred! I've been sick for the past few days, but I'll post chapter three soon. Report Review
this is good start. I have been looking for a Sirius story to get into. update soon....really good start and love the banner.Author's Response: I love the banner too!!! Adrian is the COOLEST SNAPE EVER!!!! Thanks for the review!!!!! Report Review
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