Hi there. I've been reading your story off-line for a few days and I have to say it is superb. Excellent characterizations & plot. Grammar has a few dings but in no way distracting. I hope you've written (and published) original works, you certainly have the talent!

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Nice story, but you have Ginny's birthdate incorrect. It is 11 August 1981. Also, I might have missed it, but at the end of HBP Ginny did not know of Horcruxes and it's highly unlikely Harry would have told the others.

Author's Response: Strange, I don't remember seeing Ginny's birthdate in any of the Books. You may be right though, but I have never seen it.

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Wait a minute, Nagini was killed earlier...? S.

Author's Response: Was she? Hmmm! Me thinks I might have another plot string dangling here! It'll unravel in the next chapter.

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Interesting theory about the potion being the Horcrux. I hadn't seen that one. S.

Author's Response: Thanks. I try to be as original / creative / different as possible. Sometimes it works... sometimes it doesn't.

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Interesting story, very captivating. I believe you have one factual error: Snape cannot know where Grimmauld place is, he is not the secret keeper. He even said as much at the start of HBP. Off to read more. S.

Author's Response: Sorry 'bout that! I write as fast and furious as possible and I don't have the books available for reference while / where writing. By the way, you have written my two favorite HPFF stories, Runes, and Forgotten Solution. Loved them. They were the first works I read here and they are still my favorite.

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Very good story. Keep it up! S.

Author's Response: Thanks, IHateSnakes!

I'll be updating this as and when each chapter is updated, so watch this space :)

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Great wrap-up. Sorry to see the story end but it's been a fantastic read. Please keep writing. S.

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Excellent, again! I can't wait for the end! S.

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Excellent, as always. You have a bad html tag forcing italics on the last couple pages. Do a search for: ,/i> and change it to: , S.

Author's Response: That's what I get for posting when I'm half-asleep! Thanks for letting me know.

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Excellent. I take it the A/K killed the baby, not Hermione? And St. Mungo's is as dangerous as Hogwarts! S.

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Arggg... Kill the snake! Great update. S.

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Excellent, as always. If I wasn't so tired I'd write more. S.

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Great story, can't wait for more. S.

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Very cool, I love your theories about Horcruxes. S.

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So... are Fabian and Gideon Fred and George? Interesting possibility. Excellent story. S.

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Good story, even the sad ending... Why did Peter insist on being tied up? Is there more to this? S.

Author's Response: Peter simply was intent on being captured and in his weird way was trying to be helpful. That's it for the rat. We won't hear about him further. Thanks for the review. G.

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Great update, I look forward to the final part(s). S.

Author's Response: I hope that you enjoy it. Thanks for the review. G.

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Wonderful story and Horcrux spin. I look forward to the final chapter(s). S.

Author's Response: Thank you, and we still have several chapters to go. Next one will be posted on Tuesday. G.

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Well, we all know Snape's BAD. The real question, as my brother used to say, is whether he's a bad good guy, or a good bad guy. Great story. You handled the breakup of HP & GW well. S.

Author's Response: That is exactly right! Every seventh year story depends on whether Snape is bad or good. Thanks for your comments, and I'm glad you are enjoying the story. G.

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Just one thing. You've probably heard this already, but Hogwards does not "Graduate" their students, that's an American term. They might have a "Leaving" ceremony, but not graduation.

Good story! S.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I never really thought about them not "graduating." You raise a very good point! I need to go change that shenannigans that I was talking about! Thanks for pointing that out and thanks for taking the time to leave a review! I appreciate it!

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Cute story! Good work. S.

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Yes, you've probably been told this many times now...Hermione is the oldest of the three, her birthday is 11 months before Harry's. Rons is 3 months before Harry's, I think. Keep writing! S.

Author's Response: Lol...yes I have been told this. I will be combing through the entire story eventually I hope. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Thank you for the review, it will serve as a reminder to me. -Katie

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Interesting. I like the reparte between voldy and boris! S.

Author's Response: I'm glad. I tried to write it a bit differently, having Boris use language as a tool as well as spells.

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More greatness...good job. You mentioned Ginny: "She had a handful of daffodils" I don't think they bloom in summer, only spring. I know, I know...picky, picky... S.

Author's Response: oh...huh. i'll remember that. lets just say it's the magic. ;) glad you think this is "greatness." haha. <3

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It works. Good job. S.

Author's Response: 8D thank youuuu.

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