Not bad at all, let me suggest you this : Try to seperatare your paragraphes, it will make it easier to read. Always think as if you're writing a book. Books has chapters and paragraphes. Other than that, I'll be waiting to read the second chapter. Thank you LustAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I tried to space it before but it said I left open tags. I use the Report Review
It really is a sweet story :) Keep it up LustAuthor's Response: Thanks Lust, that's really sweet of you=) Report Review
Very sweet... Thank youAuthor's Response: Thank you. It was written as a response to a challenge on another site. The challenge was to write one character being forced to confess what they did on their summer vacation to another. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
This is for the entire story. At the beginning I wasn't sure where it would lead me. But the more I read, the more I got hooked. I think that there's nothing I like more than a tortured Snape, God, does he play the role for that :) Thank you for the great storyAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm happy you enjoyed the story. I have no idea why but I do enjoy torturing Snape. It's a bit cathartic. Report Review
Emh, I have been trying to send you an email, but it seems like it ain't working like I wish it would...so..do you mind helping me out with this ( OKAI , I KNOW, this ain't a review, but you got all of them from me already HAHAHA..I need to present you a story and ask you some other stuff :)Author's Response: Ask away. I'm always here. Never got your emails, though, I'm afraid. Report Review
Very funny, very good to see a totally new personnality for some characters :o)Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading! Report Review
You might think that I reviewed the last chapters by mare lazyness...... Actually, "Perfect" is the only word that comes to mind when I read your story. It has been refreshing to find such talent. Author's Response: I'm overwhelmed and humbled by your words of praise. Thank you. And as for all the other reviews, how could I possibly ask you to say more? If you like my writing, you'll be blown away if you read stories by the authors alpha3760, Llewellyn McEllis, Prudence Prior, and many more (see my favorites list). They are the best of the best, I say. Report Review
PerfectAuthor's Response: Okay...I'm out of one-word answers, so...thanks. Report Review
PerfectAuthor's Response: Humbled. Report Review
PerfectAuthor's Response: Glad. Report Review
PerfectAuthor's Response: Heartened. Report Review
PerfectAuthor's Response: Grateful. Report Review
PerfectAuthor's Response: Ooooh, now I can answer with one word: thanks. Report Review
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