There were so many humorous parts in this chapter that I was almost constantly suppressing laughter so that my family wouldn't think that I'm more insane than I already am XD My favorite line of all had to be "I love our immaturity, never gets old." So true. Keep on writing. ~Gwynnie~

Author's Response: you have no idea how relieved i am, i thought no one would think my humor was funny.

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I absolutely adore your two OCs. They are realistic, amusing, and i feel as if I actually know them. Not Mary Sueish in the least! For that, you deserve an award *hands trophy to authoress* Keep on writing. ~Gwynnie~

Author's Response: i'm so glad you like them, i'm so happy i'm getting positive feedback

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Aww, very sweet! I love how they both gave each other comfort when such horrid things had happened- his parents and her aunt. Excellent story; keep on writing! ~Gwynnie~

Author's Response: :) i'm glad you liked it! and thanks for saying it was an excellent story, that's really nice of you! thanks very much for your review!

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*winces* Poor Remus! Hopefully Laura sets him straight...and Sirius not noticing that she had tried to kiss him *sigh* Keep on writing! ~Gwynnie~

Author's Response: You'll find out what happens with Laura and Remus in the 3rd chapter. And I'm glad you like it :)

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lol, poor girls. Loved the rant in the library part of it, keep on writing. ~Gwynnie~

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked the rant part, I had fun writing that.

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That was beautiful, it really conjured up a vivd image in my mind, especially of Tonks stealing cookies and switching with some other kid at the park. Loved it all, keep on writing. ~Gwynnie~

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

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Tsk tsk, naughty Sirius ;] Keep on writing. ~Gwynnie~

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Oh dear, I do hope that Sirius stops smoking...Good start to what promises to be an excellent fic! ~Gwynnie~

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Ooh, I haven't seen this plot before, it's a fantastic one! I love the idea so far, keep it up! And congratulations on a wonderfully canon Dubledore and excellent Hagrid dialogue! ~Gwynnie~

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What an excellent way to write a love square, and funny to boot! Keep it up! ~Gwynnie~

Author's Response: Thankies very much for your time-- I'm pleased that you liked what I'd done! Luna

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