Reading Reviews From Member: YellowChaos
  
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by YellowChaosLife Change (Part One): Therapy - an introduction

27th April 2009:
So far it is amazing! It is definitely unique and I can not wait for the next chapter. Kudos to you for the wizard therapist...I did not see that coming. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't know this was being read but I've almost finished the next 2 chapters I will work harder and get them up soon.
Thanks again, CA x


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Review #2, by YellowChaosLily's Dirty Little Secret: Prologue

20th April 2009:
I really enjoyed it great job! I loved the aww moment at the end with the naming. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try and get the next chapter up soon!

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Review #3, by YellowChaosUnmerciful Actions: The New Student

3rd December 2005:
I love this story. Teenage angst is a great thing to base a story off of. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Cool, I'll look for your reviews!

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Review #4, by YellowChaosAfter the Storm: New Beginnings

8th August 2005:
Great story. The Tupperware comment was hilarious. Writing in the third person makes it unique, and less Bob said, “this.” I said, “that.” The only thing I don’t know is how old Siera is, and it’s really irking me. *le sigh* I love it so keep writing.

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Review #5, by YellowChaosBaby It's You: Baby It's You

8th August 2005:
It’s good for your first fanfiction. Here’s a little C/C: If Angel had just arrived at Hogwarts that would mean she was elevenish, I highly doubt she would be using curse words. Before you post your chapter paste it into Word Processor or whatever you use, and run spell check. Set the scene more. Adjectives and adverbs are your friend. Overall it’s good for your first fanfiction. A review in return is always appreciated.

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