Aw I loved it =D Well done, this was a great reply to the challenge, I'm dreading posting mine now =P The only thing I had a problem with was you were using the word 'except' instead of 'accept'. 'Except' is used like, "I like them all except that one" whereas 'accept' is "I accept your invitation to the GOF premier" =P Otherwise, brilliant work. <3Author's Response: I'm actually surprised you didnt notice any other mistakes. I was so desperate to get this challenge finished, I was writing it into the early hours of the morning! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it and thankies for pointing that terrible point out! Luna. Report Review
LMFAO! Ahhh well done =D Well written and hilarious XD Poor Severus, being forced to stay in secrecy about his ABBA love...LOL! <3Author's Response: yay! another review! i'm so glad that you found it funny! :D aha, oh ABBA...thanks for the review! Report Review
Nice beginning, I'm interested to see how you introduce the other three now. It was a nice touch to open with Hufflepuff, the underrated house ;) Don't worry about reviews keep it up regardless! <3Author's Response: thank you for that...it helps...Yea, about huffelpuff Elizabeht and I noticed how much Helga is ignored so we are striving to show her in a new light.. hopefully it'll work/ ^_^ Report Review
Aw poor Regulus. I liked this story =) It was sad and really well written. I liked the commentary within the story ^_^ <3 Report Review
Wow. The description of Azkaban was chilling. Your writing is really good and descriptive. The ending was really cool, well done on a sad but great one shot ;) <3Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
LOL! Loved it XD Very well written and absolutely hilarious ^_^ Report Review
Aww R/S! lol I loved this. It was sad but beautiful. And even though I hate smoking, I can see Sirius as someone who would ;) Your writing is brilliant, I loved it ^_^ <3 Report Review
That was so sad. Your description of Godric's Hollow was chilling. Poor Harry...I hope Ginny's ok. <3 Report Review
You're brilliant at this. I feel so sorry for poor Remus. I <3 him. Well done =) <3 Report Review
Beautiful. Amazingly sad, but still beautiful. <3 Report Review
Wow...I'm liking this story =) Your writing is superb. I don't know if I should feel sorry for Mort or not...lol I can't wait to read the next chapter <3Author's Response: He is a strange character, isn't he? But what has Voldemort made him into? Anyways, thanks very much for your review, F4L, I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. :-) Report Review
*applauds* loved it =) you wrote Snape perfectly.Author's Response: Thank you very much. I do love writing him, so your kind words are very appreciated. =) Report Review
Aw the end? I really liked this, it was a cool plot. Very original =) <3 Report Review
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