{reviewid: 2185762, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
7th August 2009:
Well this has to be one unique story but I like it. It's different from the usual stories I've been reading but it's very good too. Not too sure about the guardian thing but hey everyone's a critic :D. 10/10
Peaches and Pie
Author's Response: Thank you for the 10. The guardians are a part of the Wicca tradition, which is the closest thing to a wizard's wedding that I could get at the time.
Thank you for recognizing the differences, and the review.
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{reviewid: 2183972, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
5th August 2009:
lol this was cute and their reactions to hair washing/rinsing was purely children. you'd think you were murdering them while doing it. good job 10/10
peaches and pie
Author's Response: My kids act like that too, like they're being blinded. Yet they jump right in the pool and just blink water out of their eyes with a smile. Ah, kids. Thanks so much for the review!
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{reviewid: 2183907, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
5th August 2009:
LOL I thought you were going to have Ginny tell Harry she's pregnant or something. Good story and well done. 10/10
Peaches and Pie
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{reviewid: 2176956, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
28th July 2009:
Aw sweetness. Good story, wonder why it doesn't have many reviews? I added this to my favorites so I can follow it. 10/10
Peaches and Pie
Author's Response: Okay thanks please recommend it to people! Plus I changed the name and rating so keep that in mind. ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2174879, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
26th July 2009:
Wow talk about anger. I understand why Harry's angry and Kingsley should've understood that especially if Ginny and Teddy are in danger. I wouldn't go to Shacklebolt's office if I was Harry LOL. 10/10.
Peaches and Pie
Author's Response: Harry is still the same ole Harry who gets mad at the tip of the hat and Kingsley is still calm and collected. Bless them. Thanks for reviewing again! :)
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{reviewid: 2174832, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
26th July 2009:
Holypoo, that's too much for a little boy to see. Good start though and on to the next chapter. 10/10.
Peaches and pie
Author's Response: Glad you liked the prologue! Teddy will, sadly, only see more horrific things. Thanks for reviewing! :)
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{reviewid: 2173203, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th July 2009:
The fight was a little disturbing because they aren't even talking/yelling at each other. By that I mean they are both talking but the other one isn't listening which doesn't work. Ron/Harry and lunch slash sounds way too disturbing though it was funny. Ginny should bat boogey Ron and Hermione, I read about that spell and it's wicked. 10/10
Peache and Pie
Author's Response: at the end they yell at each other but i hope to work on their "relationship" on the next chapter. Ginny should and we'll see what's going to happen... again thanx a lot 4 reading and reviewing all of my chapters with such an wonderful rating. stay tuned please!!!^_^
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2173181, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th July 2009:
Sorry it took so long to read and review this chapter. Everything and anything seemed to happen at once after I finished chapter two yesterday. Your story is the first I've read that covers a lot of the aftermath of when Harry wakes up. I like that Kreacher is still working for him. Only thing I can hope for is that Ginny will forgive him. 10/10
Peaches and Pie
Author's Response: it's okay. i think it was worth waiting 4 ur review.things are going slowly 4 Harry and Kreacher is bound to serve Harry forever as Sirius left Kreacher to Harry in his will. thanx 4 the wonderful rating.^_^
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2172168, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
23rd July 2009:
Loved Ron and Hermione, they're sweet together but Ginny's being a bit harsh with Harry. You can understand her anger but I'm sure there were things that happened she wouldn't want to share with him or more importantly she should've at least given him time to wake up and adjust before demanding answers. 10/10 once again and on once again.
Peaches and Pie
Author's Response: yeah, Ron and Hermione are being sweet but they needed to talk about their kiss. yes, i agree, Ginny was a little harsh with Harry but what can i say? Ginny will manage to think about her feelings 4 Harry but read more please. thanx 4 the rating and stay tuned please!!!^_^
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2172166, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
23rd July 2009:
Interesting story so far, I'm interested to see where it goes. Your paragraphs are spaced too far apart though and some of them are really long. I know it's hard to get them spaced just right but I'm working on mine too with a brand new story and will rewrite my old ones. 10/10 and on to the next chapter.
Peaches and Pie
Author's Response: thank u 4 ur kind review. about the paragraphs, well u have to say that to my computer, he's a little crazy about the spacing. keep reading my story please!^_^
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 1935150, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
28th May 2008:
LOL on the story rewrite. For a few chapters I thought maybe I forgot what some of the chapters said but nope definate rewrite since I last read them.
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{reviewid: 1927434, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
19th May 2008:
Well this is ... interesting to say.
Author's Response: Glad you found it ....interesting.
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{reviewid: 1922522, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
14th May 2008:
Oh my this was a GREAT ending. I hate reviewing so I don't if I can possibly avoid it but this had to have a review. Love most of the story and it was brilliant.
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{reviewid: 1922322, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
13th May 2008:
Cute, I liked this a lot.
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{reviewid: 1920913, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
12th May 2008:
Nice concept for a story but considering Voldemort was to kill Harry isn't it jumping the gun for James and Lily to assume he's going to Petunia's? It's OMO
Author's Response: I mean, Lily and James would have known about the blood ties to Petunia, so they would know that he was going there. I think Dumbledore would have told them that if Lily died to save Harry, then he would have been safe.. Of course, I think that if Sirius hadn't been in Azkaban, then he would have been an active part of Harry's life and would have had something like visitation.
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{reviewid: 1647180, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
28th September 2007:
Good story got confused for a minute but reread before commenting. Giving you a 10
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{reviewid: 1116940, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th August 2006:
That was a sweet story and a sweet way to think of Ron.
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{reviewid: 1038549, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
26th June 2006:
I think now I'm confused.
Author's Response: ok why are you confused? well later on it will be a bit more easier to understand
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{reviewid: 1036980, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th June 2006:
Okay now I'm completely lost. Please update and soon.
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{reviewid: 1036972, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th June 2006:
I can't believe I stayed up all night to read this. The suns out and the birds have been chirping for hours. Fun but I'm loving the story. I'm so happy that Remus didn't betray Harry on purpose but one little thing. How could he have lost his feelings for Harry after Sirius' 'death' just to come to care about him again years later when Harry was accused of murder?
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{reviewid: 1036951, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th June 2006:
WHOA!!!
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{reviewid: 1036942, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th June 2006:
That's a good one
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{reviewid: 1036922, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th June 2006:
I'm just taking a wild guess but you don't like DUmbledore do you? LOL thinking of him like this is making me hate him too.
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{reviewid: 1036882, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th June 2006:
What's gruel?
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{reviewid: 1036880, reviewer: 'Peaches%20and%20Pie'}
25th June 2006:
OMG OMG OMG OMGOMG OMG This was really truely GOOD!
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