Hahaha, Liam, this is hilarious. I love love love your writing style, and the whole referring to yourself as 'the author' thing. Favourited - (It's PieIsMyFriend from tda, by the way) Report Review
Aw, sweet. Great story :)Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing. x Report Review
Aw, James is dead sweet. But please don't make Remus too possesive! I want him to stay all sweet ...Author's Response: yeah, i guess he is getting a little out of charater. but he will aleas be sweet. :) x Report Review
Ah! I hate Sirius! I love Remus! Ah! The characterisations in this are really perfect, and I love the funny bits you sneak in. Amazing!Author's Response: hahahahah i always preffered remus too. thanks for reviewing!!! x Report Review
Love it! Awesome second chapter, this is really interesting!Author's Response: thanks for the review~! x Report Review
Oh my gosh. Well, I'll tell you this. I was NOT expecting it to be that good. No, not good - amazing! You're a brilliant writer! I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes, because so far I can sort of tell ... onto the next chapter!Author's Response: oh hi! thanks for reviewing!! im so glad you liked it! please continue reviewing my chapters. x Report Review
Hahaha! Wow! That was amazing - you are such a good writer, and funny too! Loved Parvati's characterisation, and Harry's bemusement ... the whole thing, actually. Good job!! Report Review
Aw! That was so sweet and romantic. I just wonder -why exactly is Dominique talking about random things non-stop? Is it because she's nervous? Only I would find that really annoying. Teddy seems to find it annoying too, so how come he likes her so much? Sorry for the random questions, but this fic made me think a lot. Great job! Report Review
Great start so far, I'm interested to see where this goes. I think the only thing really letting this fic down is the grammar, which is a little sketchy in places. Love lorcan's character so far - 9/10Author's Response: Thanks, maybe I'll get a beta for this when I start writing more of it. :) Report Review
Oh my gosh, that was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I'll admit, I was absolutely scandalized at the beginning (Oh no! Ron! How could you cheat on Hermione like that?!) But when I realised ... oh wow. My chest hurts from laughing! Congrats on the Dobby, this totally deserves it!Author's Response: Ron, cheat on Hermione? NEVER! ^_^ Thank you for the wonderful review! Report Review
YAAAY! You updated! Okay, I'm probably very late with this. But still. YAY! Great chapter! The only thing I would say is, try not to make Fe too ... perfect. I know she has a temper, but so far both James II and Freddie II seem to be in love with her for no reason. Which ... is a little unrealistic. BUT don't get me wrong, I love this story and I'd love to know where it's going. Please update soon! Report Review
Luna! This is awesome! Sounds like these duels are gonna be a hoot and a half, can't wait to see what happens ... and I love how everyone sees the Dueling Competition as a chance to ... er ... prove themselves to their crushes, haha. Report Review
I love this chapter. You have some really good ideas going, with the narrator Hermione and George being the only one to remember Fred's death. And there are the sweet, subtle things between Fred and Hermione ... so cute and romantic. Gah, I love this fic! I'm hooked. Please update soon!Author's Response: Chapter 3 is in the validation queue :) I'm glad you like it! Thank you for taking the time to read/review! Report Review
I am so glad I saw your banner request. Otherwise I would never have read this amazing fic! This is such an great concept, and your description is STUNNING. And it's so so sad. :( But you have managed to make it interesting and intriguing and not too mopey, which is pretty difficult to do. And plus, you thought of timeturners to bring back Fred ... which I never even thought of. *feels stupid* Anyway, you're onto a winner here. Keep writing, it's wonderful! And I can't wait for some Fred/ Hermione. 10/10Author's Response: I'm so glad you were willing to take on my banner :) And I'm so happy you like the story! (not gonna lie, I've read a few of yours and they are incredible!) Thank you so much for reading and I hope you like the following chaps :) Report Review
Oh my gosh, I love your story! This is awesome. PLEASE update soon! I'm another person who just can't read description, so thank you for being so thoughtful :) Anyway. I love this. I can't wait to see where this is going! 10/10.Author's Response: Omigod! Thank you! Gosh, I was actually beginning to think that I was the only one :| So thanks for that :D x Report Review
That is quite brilliant. I love James, and Lily, and ... aw, everything. GOOD JOB!Author's Response: Thanks! James and Lily are always adorable. No author can tamper with their cuteness. No matter what they write. Hm. Lol thanks for reviewing Report Review
Lol, very funny. Poor Percy!Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Report Review
Nooo! Wow, you totally fooled me. And I'm a bit sad that she didn't end up with Sirius - make that really really sad. :( But at least she found Peter! And I love the last line, it's kind of happy and sad at the same time ... if that makes any sense. This is not like any Sirius/OC story I've ever read before. Thank you for writing it! 10/10Author's Response: Thanks very much for taking the time to read and review this story! :D It is different from the usual Sirius/OC (which was my point in writing it), and I'm glad you still liked the ending. I definitely took a risk in ending i that way, so it means a lot that you didn't hate it. ^_^ Report Review
Haha, I love Charlie. Great fic, I loved it :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Wow. I love it. That is such an original, awesome idea! The whole thing - there is nothing I would change! Well, only that there is only one chapter. I need more! (By the way, I found this in the fanfiction thread at TDA :) It's PieIsMyFriend) Please please please update! I love Addie already, and if you are going to add in some Sirius Black ... :D Report Review
Ooh this is weird. Veeery weird. I'm intrigued! Report Review
Oh no, I'm not sure I like the way Sirius is acting . Are you trying to totally confuse us? Cos it's working! Another awesome chapter :)Author's Response: Haha, most definitely. *evil grin* It's supposed to be a bit confusing as that's what Eleanor is feeling while she tries to figure Sirius out. :D Glad you're still enjoying the story! ^_^ Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review. Report Review
:O Aaww. That is probably one of the sweetest and most believable starts to a Sirius/OC fic I've ever read. 10/10Author's Response: Aww! Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked it, and thought it sweet. :D Hope you enjoy the rest! Report Review
Hahahahaha that's awesome! I was laughing the whole time :D Report Review
Aaaw! That was the sweetest thing I've ever read ... I actually really got into this story, and saw a bit of Hermione/Ron chemistry, which I have never really got before ... wow. Just wow. It was amazing - favourited!Author's Response: oh wow well thank you!! :D Report Review
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