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Review #1, by DivergentHarryTARDISMusicEvolution: Sixth Year Slump

26th May 2014:
First I just gotta say how much I truly love your writing. I really appreciate your "slow burn", in fact I wish more authors wrote like this. From the moment I began reading this story a couple of weeks ago I automatically fell in love with it. I've loved your displays of the characters, and how you have managed your time in each chapter. Your work is truly inspiring for me as a beginning writer. Secondly, this is probably my favorite chapter so far! I love how well the duel between James and Lily came out! Not many people are able to capture the duels as well as you have here. Again, amazing job! I cant wait to see what else you have in store!
Oh and I hope this isn't asking for too much, since I understand how busy you must be writing this story, but if you could take the time to read my story it would mean the world to me. It's called 'The Life and Death of Violet Chambers', and I only have a Prologue up so far. But I would really appreciate your input and constructive criticism. Please and thank-you. (:

Author's Response: Howdy! Thank you so much for sticking with the story and taking the time to leave a review!

I'm definitely glad you like my take on the "slow burn". I'll be the first to admit it's going to be way too slow for some people, but my whole goal was to make it believable, and I think this taking a lot of time is. It means a lot that you like the characters and find them believable because that's exactly what I want to achieve!

As far as the duel goes, it's great that you enjoyed it! I worried for quite some time after posting this (though you're the first to comment on the duel at all) that I had made the magic they proved capable of at the end "too much" for their age. So at least I have one voice now who thought it was well done!

Again, I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave a review! I hope you keep enjoying the story!


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