YOU COMMENTED ONE OF MY STORIES!!! I can't FREAKING believe YOU commented one of MY stories!!! AHHH!!! Okay, my freakout is over. I'm sorry I stopped the "I'm a Fake" stories, they're so going to continue, but I'm to no good once again, almost finished with a novel-length fanfiction on another of my favorite series. If you like vampires, or even just romance in general, check out House of Night by PC and Kristin Cast. If you like it, send me an E-Mail at SarahRose31 at gmail dot com... you have to write it like that, because you're not supposed to put emails or links on here... I've got a new fic out that takes place directly after "Hunted". :D!!! I'd be happy if you checked it out.
Thanks for your review, I love your story.Author's Response: Haha I'm going to email you like right now :)
I love House of night series! I've got all of them :) haha.
And I love your story :) You better continue!
I can't wait to read your fan fiction on it. I'll def check it out later.
xx Report Review
“I mean… With me up… There… On the broom.” Awkward.
I absolutely love the "awkward" at the end of that line.Author's Response: haha =) thanks!
- C Report Review
AHH!! BUT DRACO MAKES HER HAPPIEST?! WHATS GOING ON?!
Lovely couple of chapters by the way, very nicely done. Report Review
It would be absolutely fine if you didn't have a memory in each chapter!Author's Response: Thanks, I just didn't want to dissapoint :) Report Review
Nicely done staying in-character! :) I'm looking forward to reading more, I'm probably going to do this in one sitting though it's already 1:23 am... I'll be okay! It's daylight savings tonight, I get an extra hour! I'm excited to see where this goes.
PS. 1st paragraph, last sentence "Hopelessness knawed," = gnawed.
PPS. Anything I try to correct it is purely in the form of constructive criticism! I like it when people help me out with my mistakes, so I'm hoping not to offend, but to do the same.Author's Response: Thanks, phew!! I always want to make sure characters are . . . . in character, loll otherwise when I'm writing it doesn't feel real. One sitting? Please don't faint, as I told someone last time. Then again, I was up answering reviews since 11 until 4 last night loll so I can't talk.
PS Thanks for correcting!!
PPS. I know it is, don't worry about it. I love your penname by the way :) Report Review
This chapter is my favorite so far. You're really bringing out Draco's stubbornness, I enjoy this because most people tend to rush the fics, within the first four chapters Draco has usually kissed her in completely confused anger, or something of the sort. Keep doin' what your doin' and you'll be doin' fine.Author's Response: I'm pleased it was your favourite, as Draco being naked I thought was a really cliche issue. :) Means loads, thanks. Oh, Draco without his stubborness just wouldn't be him!! Must have that in!! Oh no, I wouldn't rush. I'm fresh to Dramione's but the thing is, I knew I didn't want anything to be stale in the way that I wrote. I'm pleased you thought it wasn't. :) Report Review
Once again, the only tiny little thing I can point out that is of any flaw in your amazing story is that, being a second year, there is now way that Draco Malfoy could be a prefect, as that position is only chosen, to my knowledge, at year 4. =) Other than that, amazing fic, I'm really interested to see how it plays out.Author's Response: That is actually meant to be fifth year, not second. I must change that straight away, thought I'd edited that part!! Obviously not, loll. Thanks for calling it amazing, but it really does not fall under that category. Have you read the Queen Of Dramione writers? They've been doing them for longer then me and know exactly how to do things. :) Report Review
This fic has an amazing starting point, but as of second year Hermione and co. can only be about 12-13 years old MAXIMUM. As Harry had JUST turned 11 and started his school year directly after in the first book, so maybe you should change the year if this fic is going to progress with any sort of relationships. Amazing fic otherwise though.Author's Response: It was completely meant to say fifth year, but I must have forgotten to take out the second year reference!! :) I'll do that after I've answered the rest of these reviews. I'm really pleased you think it's good, as this is my first Dramione and I wanted to make an impression.
Thanks again, Bleeding. Report Review
I thought this was going to be the end!! I'm so happy it's not, but in another way I honestly wish it were, because I would know what happens next! Please update quickly.Author's Response: No, of course this is not the end. The re are still The Feldons, and Verona, and.. soo many other things... Report Review
Love this chapter! AND I LOVE YOUR STORY! Of course I keep forgetting to add it to my RSS feed, but this time I'll most definitely remember. Please update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Report Review
I was so excited when I read "Ramshackle" because I figured you'd be doing another story! I'm so happy!!! I can't wait to continue the series!
PS. How ill you put up the chapters so quickly? I always have to wait about 10 days or so? Are you on the "trusted authors" list or something??Author's Response: Yes, I am a Trusted Author. I didn't realize just how lucky I was to get it (I got it pretty early--about halfway into Hogwarts Revisited) until I lost it temporarily after the site crash. Now I really appreciate what I've got because boy, is it hard to wait 10 days to see your postings...
And thanks so much for following all of my stuff--that means SO much to me! :) Report Review
for being sick this chapter was alright :) keep at it.Author's Response: Thanks. I will. Report Review
Please, please, please don't abandon this story! You have a really great idea going here.Author's Response: don't worry, i'm not going to abandon this story Report Review
Urhm I really sorta love this fic... so you should really really keep writing. Author's Response: Haha, im sooo glad yu like it...I'll definately keep writing =] thanks!
-Alex- Report Review
I *LOVE* how this was kept so perfectly in character, despite all of the changes.
You're a brilliant writer! Report Review
How do you wait over a month after ending a wonderful story in such a cliffie? This story is brilliant, continue please.
~*-Sarah-*~Author's Response: Im so sorry! random stuff kept happening, but hopefully the next update will be sooner!! thanks for the review!! Report Review
I'm really loving this story... please keep writing Report Review
Aww, cute story... Keep posting, I like it. Report Review
Woah. Great fic. I'm loveing it... you have to keep posting plzzzz lol
Author's Response: thank you soo much for reading(and loveing it!! lol) I'm working on the next chapter, it shouldnt be long untill its up! :D Report Review
KEEP UPDATING! I like this fic. i read the whole thing of Lifestyles #1 over again right before i read this... great fix... Report Review
I'm likeing this story already.. Thanks for the review on my story, go look back at it because i responded...
AKA: Bleeding_Red_RosesAuthor's Response: awe thanks! im glad you're likeing it! Report Review
Umm... woah... that was morbid...good story though...
*~*Sarah*~* Report Review
WOWWWWWWWWWW YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITING THIS!! it's hilarious Report Review
I like this story, and i'd love it if you kept writing. Report Review
KEEP WRITING! You reviewed my story Whisky Lullaby, so I thought I'd return the favor, this is hilarous... btw the slip up means that her and Draco are going out right? Author's Response: You are the first person to notice that (or at least mention it in their review.) but i'm not going to tell you. You will find out in the chapter that is in waiting now. Thanks for reviewing Report Review
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