Wow, this is great!
I actually felt really hopeless and sad myself whilst reading this, so you definitely did something right with the second person narrative, it really got through to me.
You really captured the essence of what having the locket on would feel like. I loved every second :D
xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing this! I'm not sure how I feel about it, so it's nice to get some positive feedback :)
I'm glad you thought the second person perspective worked (I have never written it before) and that it seemed realistic.
Thanks for reading! Report Review
I thought this was really cute :D
xxAuthor's Response: Thank you :) I really wasn't sure about it when I first wrote it, but the response has been brilliant so it was obviously worth it. I'm glad you enjoyed it xx Report Review
Hey there! I've just finished reading this and I really enjoyed it!
I particularly loved your characterisation of Snape. I thought you wrote him really well, his speech sounded great and his behaviour was all well explained and rational, just as I like it :D
I have to say, my favourite minor characters are Ryann and Jill, not really sure why though. I'd love to read more about them, anyways :D
I love the letters between her and Charlie, and how little references of them pop up in later chapters and in different places. I had a few little giggles reading them, which is always good.
I had a great time reading, can't wait to get onto the second year! Thanks for taking the time to write.
:D x Report Review
definitely my fave fan fic! love the mystery of this apperation stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Wow, what a compliment. I'm so happy you like it. Thanks so much for the review. Report Review
I like this story. very muchly. indeedAuthor's Response: Well my work here is done then. Report Review
still as good as ever, will check out the other site.
Sophie xAuthor's Response: Thanks! I have made several changes though the basic storyline remains in tact. The chapters ended up being slightly longer though as there's more detail, etc. Glad your still enjoying this story as already posted here. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Keep the good stuff coming.!
I am in deep anticipation for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: I'm working on it. Unfortunately, I haven't had a chance to finish it yet. I'll do my best to get something done within a week. Report Review
Well I havnt read a story in ages that made me cry. but this one did. Bloody amazing, keep it up!Author's Response: I had tears in my eyes a couple of times as well, while writing it. I'm glad to hear it got to someone else as well. Thanks for the amazing review! Report Review
keep up the good work. i like the story but am in a bit of a muddle of whos veiwpoint its coming from. At first its ron and then it's narrated and then its hermione. Just to clear that. Report Review
Keep al the good work flowing! I'm loving it all. I think the story line is fantastic.Author's Response: Thanks! It's a little different story than others I saw, but then, that's why I started writing it. Other than that, I am trying to stay on character based on my interpretation of the books. Chapter 18 is the longest yet, and I am almost ready to upload it. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Report Review
Keep up the good work. I'm really interested in this! Report Review
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