Reading Reviews From Member: 0o0Athena0o0
  
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Review #1, by 0o0Athena0o0Love of the Heads: You're So Vain
23rd May 2007:
This might sound a little harsh, so sorry, I swear I'm only trying to help.
Your paragraphs are spaced way to far apart, pick up the book nearest you, that is how they should be placed. Watch your spelling (I have the same problem), and gramer.
Overall, this could be a really good story, I like it so far.
0o0Athena0o0

Author's Response: Thank you for the criticism - it is noted and appreciated [ =

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Review #2, by 0o0Athena0o0A Tale of Two Lovers: The Story of Lily and James Potter: The First Day
4th June 2005:
I love this!!!!!!! it's great!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Athena

Author's Response: thanks!

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Review #3, by 0o0Athena0o0A Different Answer: Chapter 1: A Truth Told
3rd June 2005:
This is really good, PLZ update soon, I can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! The next chapter should be coming up tomorrow or Sunday!

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