Reading Reviews From Member: MaeAndRee14
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Review #1, by MaeAndRee14Flawless: Flawless

3rd April 2014:
Hi Ashwini! Now you must forgive me! I'm so so sorry! I'm so late for our review swap! Sorry!

I loved this! Can I just say, that I'm seeing a lot more fluff in your work? And I LOVE IT! Btw, cant wait for the next chapter of TTD!

The emotions! Girl, so not fair to have so many gorgeous emotions in such a perfectly written story!! I don't know what to say! Speechless! Love it! The thoughts on how he wasn't flawless but he was flawless to her was so gorgeous!! and the ending! perfection!! the "who says I don't want your body" haha! Hilarious! and really really suited to the story!!

I would just recommend putting a tiny bit more description of feelings in? Other than that, i don't have anything!!

Really great job Ashwini! And I so so sorry that this is so late (and short!)!

-Curie :)

Author's Response: Curie! :D

How can I not forgive you? This review was so nice! :D It made up for being late. ;)

Yes, I'm trying to write fluff a little more to get comfortable with it and be versatile with writing. Or maybe I'm doing that because I chat with you? XD

OMG thank you so much Curie! You make me blush, you make me cry. I don't know what to say. I am speechless. Just... Thanks! :')

I'll surely think about adding more description of feelings. :)

Thanks again!


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Review #2, by MaeAndRee14Vox wuod Sanctimonia: Cupiditas

3rd April 2014:
Hey hey Rumpel!! How are you?? Been too long! I'm so sorry, but this is from our review swap like months ago!! So so sorry!! But onto the review?

I really loved this Rumpel! So perfect! Really! Mostly, I loved the tone! The words used were amazingly suited for the era and the type of story and the language in general was awesome! i think you've captured it extremely well!

i also LOVE LOVE LOVE Salazar! And the friendship him and godric have is perfect! So so sweet! Love it! And then how he meets Rowena! GAH! That scene was amazingly perfect!

I loved the setting description too! :D Amazing!

The only thing I have for CC is in the first conversation between Godric and Salazar, maybe add in who was speaking? It got a little unclear after a little while :)

This was really perfect! I really want to go and see the companion piece to see more romance (hopefully?)

Sorry again for the late review!

-Curie ;)

Author's Response: Hey there! No problem!!

This was fun to write -- I had a great partner who was extremely helpful!

Whoo! Salazar and Godric's friendship was one thing that I wanted to focus on besides the potential romantic interest towards Rowena.

Oops! I like to remove tags wherever I can, though I may have gone overboard this time! Sorry about that!

Thanks so much! No worries!


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Review #3, by MaeAndRee14The Ties that Bind: Prologue

17th March 2014:
Hi hun! sorry for the super super late review (from our review swap if you don't remember :P)

Characterisation: so painfully perfect! Like seriously, Hermione is just so beautifully portrayed. It really is, her thoughts and her words are just so suited to her character! And you write her in a way that had me wanting to curl up in a ball and cry! So much raw emotion! And Ron! Poor Ron! All throughout the story, you made me want to give him a big bear hug! And the innocence is so childlike! I love love love it! And that sentence, Do you think hes really d-d-ea was perfect! And how he said how much he missed him! Perfect!!

Description: Gorgeous! Even though you said that you didnt write the first bit, I want to congratulate you on choosing the right part to put in your story! And the image of Ron standing in front of the mirror with a crack through it is perfect! It really is, I could almost see him! As for CC, maybe using more of the senses? This chapter focuses mainly on sight and a tiny bit of feel/touch. Maybe using a bit more smell or hearing? I know its a challenge, but since you're so talented, maybe try going for a challenge (imagine trying taste! :P )

Plot/Flow: Perfect! I love the plot! Sounds so so interesting! :D I really do love it! And the interactions between Romione are perfect!! Kudos to you for portraying this scene with strong bonds of friendship and showing their trust in each other and how they comfort each other! Most of all, thank you so so much for not turning it into a romantic scene!! Thank you! The plot in general, with the brief mention of Dumbledore and Ginny was perfect! The flow was fine and nothing major to comment on!

Great job! :D I love this!! :) We must do more review swaps! Sorry again for the super late review!

-ReeBee :)

Author's Response: Sorry I never got this! Life has been kind of rough.hetic.crazy lately. But this just put a smile on my face. I think we should do more review swaps as well. :) And I really liked your idea to use more senses. I want to incorporate that into upcoming chapters. Thanks again!

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