{reviewid: 1116225, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
25th August 2006:
the formats really confusing but the stopry plot in itself is good
Author's Response: Oh well thank you
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{reviewid: 1089508, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
3rd August 2006:
Hey its ateensfan the author of new students just so you know i updated I tell people regurly when I do so just let me know if you don't want to be told.
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{reviewid: 1084244, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
31st July 2006:
very nice i like it so far
Author's Response: Thankyou soooo much! :D
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31st July 2006:
omg update this is soo good i didn't think viktor would show up till the wedding this is getting good update soon
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{reviewid: 1047231, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
3rd July 2006:
keep going sounds good i love it please update
Author's Response: I just submited the next chapter hopefully it won't take forever to be accepted thanks for reading and glad you love it
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{reviewid: 1034709, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
23rd June 2006:
very nice it reminds me of that movie on abc family but I can't remember the name of it keep going
Author's Response: I have a feeling it is Cutting Edge, but it might be another one.
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{reviewid: 1033841, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
23rd June 2006:
i didn't read your story but a formatting issue is when you have too much spacing between the lines or not enoughits soo confusing if there is not spacing then space it our between the paragraphs and if there is too much don't double space just put a space between each paragrah and it should be okay
Author's Response: Thanks, I keep fixing it and re-submiting but, boo hoo, no luck :(
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{reviewid: 997917, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
24th May 2006:
my guess is terry boot. i dont know why i just flet like guessing him.....please update soon your doing really well dont mind the rating i go low till the last chappie or so!
Author's Response: nice guess. cant tell you the answer hehe!
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{reviewid: 958079, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
13th April 2006:
l0l pretty good keep going im interested to see what comes next, and i will read on l0l, but just to make reading a little easier could you maybe double space the story or even put a space between paragraphs cause i loose my place a lot with ll the words clamped together. Thanks
Author's Response: the truth is i tried but it came out spaced wierd so maybe i just didnt do it right, ill try it again, thanks
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{reviewid: 788964, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
29th November 2005:
hey chapter 16 is up in my story
Author's Response: thanks for teklling me
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{reviewid: 737714, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
17th October 2005:
hey its ateensfan just thought id let you now chapter 15 of new students is up!
Author's Response: ok i get it know when you said Chapter 14 is up i got really confused thank you so much for telling me im gona read it right after i answer my reviews
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{reviewid: 737712, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
17th October 2005:
hey its ateensfan just thought id let you now chapter 15 of new students is up!
Author's Response: kool im on my way yayayayay i love that story PPL GO READ THAT STORY IT ROCKS luv ya
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{reviewid: 699649, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
18th September 2005:
chapter 14 up!
Author's Response: ???? im on chapter 2..........
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{reviewid: 699648, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
18th September 2005:
chapter 14 of my story is up! by the way great story
Author's Response: ohhhh awsome i love love love your story it is sooooo good i love it ur a fab writer i love you thank you soo much for reading and revieng my story lol thanks heasp ATTENTION EVERYBODY READ ATEENSFAN STORY IT ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! soz--->lol u rock
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18th September 2005:
harrypotter151
Author's Response: ateensfan
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{reviewid: 650260, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
16th August 2005:
hey sara grea job! Im still loving this story!
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks! Sorry I'm not helping you anymore but I am really busy....sorry. Glad you love it!!
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{reviewid: 637686, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
9th August 2005:
good job update soon!
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{reviewid: 637680, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
9th August 2005:
this is actuually pretty good reminds me of beauty and the beast
but personally i think hermione would have put up more of a fight
Author's Response: yea she probably would of put up more of a fight...thx for reading...oh i love beauty and the beast its such a dramione story you kno?
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{reviewid: 595828, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
15th July 2005:
chapter 7 up and LOVE this chapter its perfect couldn't be better!
Author's Response: Thanks, I kinda don't like it but it means a lot to know someone thinks that its perfect!! Really thank you!! -Sara
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{reviewid: 595820, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
15th July 2005:
chapter 7 up
Author's Response: Read it and I'm now no longer reading your story.
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{reviewid: 590108, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
11th July 2005:
I could make you a banner if you want contact me at ateensgal@yahoo.com
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll have to tell you tomorrow about the banner
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{reviewid: 589400, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
11th July 2005:
Its good but I have one suggstion proof read!!! LOL you have a lot of errors I could help you if you want.
Author's Response: i didn't type it....my little 12 year old nephew wanted typing prac. and he said he proof read it so i trusted him. thanks for telling me and reading...i'll fix it
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{reviewid: 589395, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
11th July 2005:
Interesting Very interesting.. please update
Author's Response: My close friends sound it interesting as well. I'll update in a few moments
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{reviewid: 585212, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
8th July 2005:
Okay your story is confusing me a bit.
1: Your spelling and grammar definatly need to be fixed, I could give you a hand if you want.
2: I know you are saying Hermione has changed but you are making it all happen to fast slow it down a bit.
3: Your story is a little plain so far, in most Draco/ Hermione stories Hermione changes try to ad something really different in.
Sorry if I put to much critizm, you can critize my story back is it will make you feel better. :D
~Ateensfan
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{reviewid: 581888, reviewer: 'ateensfan'}
7th July 2005:
Aother Great Chapter I wonder How her Parents Will react next time shes home with the the tatoo, I love the on bloomin rose its sweet, and the dad interogation really made me laugh great job!
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