I did like it...the more I read the more I feel sorry for Draco. *sob* Poor boy. On a brighter note I'm so glad it's summer and you're writing again!Author's Response: Oh man am I soooo glad it's summer!!! NO MORE SCHOOL!!! YEAHHHHH!!! And I'll get to update a lot...for me. lol...I'm glad you liked it tho; personally I wasn't as happy with this chapter as I was with the previous ones. I like this story better than my other story, Stranded in Darkness, though. Others agree, I think, cuz I have a much larger fan base (ah that sounds corny) for this story! Report Review
Good start! You gotten me interested, I want to know everything! There's just one thing (and I'm rather guilty of it myself, striving hard to oversome it) I'd really like longer chapters. *cough* Please? ;-)Author's Response: of course! the whole story is being re-edited. i didn't realize the was no word limit (i thought it was 600 for the longest time.) so a lot of decriptions got cut in my effort to meet my imaginary limit...
i've written up to chapter seven with eight being worked on. the site rejected my chapter 4-7 twice, so i've raised my rating and am going to try again... Report Review
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