Hi I really like your story. But, I think maybe you should slow it down, the story is very fast paced which is okay sometimes, but maybe you should slow it down fill it in with fillers occasionally, and maybe develop the characters relationships more and the characters themselves too. I hope you don't take this badly I just want to help :)

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Its really awesome!! It makes me warm inside. You kinda sprang the whole Remus being deputy headmaster on us though!

Author's Response: Thank you, your review makes me feel warm inside - it's really lovely to know people actually like what you're writing =).

As for the whole Remus becoming Deputy - well, I think he deserves a break ;).

Thanks for the review!

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OMG! I love this it's so exciting! I can't wait for more! and to find out where Harry is!

Author's Response: More hopefully coming soon if I can convince myself to sit down and write again!

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Yeah!! another chapter I'm so happy keep p the awesome work!

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OMG!! I love this! it's making me beg for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it, Spade. Thanks for the review!

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holy s**t i love youre story and it sound really good with snow patrol in the background.

Author's Response: Why thank you :o)

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OMG!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! ok sorry bout that couldn't help meself! lol you should try writing more like this I'm sure they'd be just as funny! :)

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one word: awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing

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I love it! it was really sweet

Author's Response: ohhh thanks so much!

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I'm SO happy!! 'nother chappie yeah. I love what you did to Ron it's verry funny

Author's Response: always happy to make someone happy!! lol yeah, it was inspired from friends (chandeler got this book about marriage and preached everyone about it and stuff) thanks a bunch and look for an update in the near future!!

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Love it!! oh my bloody god I love it.

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Im so happy blah blah blah!! love it! cant wait for more

Author's Response: thanks : )

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YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(FOR LACK OF SOMETHIN' ELSE TO SAY)sorry bout the capitols

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YEAH!!!!! new chapter! im so happy balh blah blah!(you know that song)

Author's Response: I think I do (although it's hard to tell lol). Thanks for the review!

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YOU SAID HOGWARTS!!! sorry couldnt help that

Author's Response: Lol, okay.

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oh goody there is more so happy tralala but its a bit sad at the end but oh well i still love it cant wait for more! Have you seen my pet elephant phil?

Author's Response: =) No, I haven't seen your elephant phil. I'll let you know if I have. Thank you for reviewing (multiple times, might I add)!!

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I like it it's really cool!! cant wait to read more!!!!

Author's Response: awesome! im glad you liked it! read the sequel! thanks for the review!

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I love it its greatt! but im sad its over! i cant wait to read more by you though!!!! :P :) =) =P

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I really like your story it makes me laugh and all sorts. i cant wait for more!!! :P

Author's Response: thanks! =) I'm doing my best to get the next one up!

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I actually half cried cuz its over but I love and ...uh cant wait for sequel

Author's Response: really? A lot of people ended up crying! lol sorry! thanks for your review and be sure to check out the sequel.

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I'm so sad it's almost over what will i ever do without this *runs to a corner and cries* I love it so much I cant wait too read the end though!

Author's Response: I don't know what I'll do either! I love this story so much and now its almost over!! *sobs and sits in corner with Spade* Thank you so much and look for an update!

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Love it I love the part with all the girls it was funny!!

Author's Response: lol thank you very much and... the next update'll be soon!

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Yeah!!!!!I love it. Im so sad but hyper that its almost over 'runs away crying' SUGAR sorry had to put that

Author's Response: I know! FINALLY! Sorry it took so long to update! I'll update the final chapters pretty close together, before oct. 8, the story should be finished. Thanks and YEAH SUGAR!

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Im so happy there's more!! cant wait for more~!! could you explain why there are two sequel's tough it's a bit confusing. Thanks

Author's Response: hmm...I could lie and say I wanted to appeal to two different audiences, but the truth is I liked them both but couldnt decide which to choose for the true sequel. lol. Sorry for the confussion, just sort of couldn't help it. More should be coming soon, just waiting for validation.

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I LOVE IT ITS OK TO TAKE A WHILE JUST NOT TOO LONG

Author's Response: OKAY! THANKS FOR THE REVIEW! (I'M ASSUMING YOU USED CAPS LOCK FOR EMPHASIS????) lol. Thank you so much! :D

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