Great chapter! Hmmm, why am i suddenly reminded of hte half blood prince? lol, update soon!
ElfieAuthor's Response: Um.... What? :) Well, thank you for the review. I'll try to update sooner than last time. Report Review
Hey great story so far. Is Hermione really over Ron? I hope not! Hannah sounds cute. I hope she brings them together! Lovin the story and hope you dont have writers block for too long!
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Wow that was SO good. So i wonder what draco's smile was all about? Is he up to something? Can Hermione really resist him? Update soon!
ElfieAuthor's Response: Well, Draco is a bit waco, so the smile could mean anything, but it actually means he's happy. :) Hermione can do what ever she wants, she's a witch. :) I'll try to update as soon as possible. This stupid thing called life gets in the way all the time. :) Report Review
UPDATE!!!!! Cant wait for the action, this is a good story.
ElfieAuthor's Response: Thanks Elfie! Updates will come soon! Report Review
That was pretty funny but poor Lupin! How the HELL did Lucius know!!! Update soon!
ElfieAuthor's Response: hmmm maybe he's psychic!! he's actually a seer...lol i'm kidding.. thanks! Report Review
Nooooo! Cant believe it stopped there. Ive been reading these chaps for ages and had a little grin in place and was about to click for the next chapter and it wasnt there!!!!! Update soon! ARGHE!
ElfieAuthor's Response: aww, i'm sorry! i've been trying to write, but i have so much school crap to do...boo...hopefully tonight after work! Report Review
Jeez, Sirius is really up front and personal! Hmm, wishing i was Hermione...i mean...great story!
ElfieAuthor's Response: yeah he is up close and personal! i wish i could meet him! lol.. thanks!! Report Review
Wow, kool first chapter. I love time travel fics!!! YAY! Im gonna go read the next chapter so until my next review,
ElfieAuthor's Response: thanks! Report Review
Interesting fisrt chapter/ I wonder what's happened? Update soon,
ElfieAuthor's Response: THanks for reviewing!! as for what happened, welll you'll jsut have to wait and see! :) Report Review
OMG OMG OMG!!! Update quick!!!!Please!!!!! Thats was soooooooo gooooooddddd. An untimely meeting in the hall, poor Hermione but fate is obviously busily at work!
ElfieAuthor's Response: Fate, yes and I very devoted fanfic author. :) I love to make their heads spin. Thank you. Report Review
Holy...that was so good! I love that teacher guy, whatever/whoever he is. Mysterious...im intruigued. You have many interesting ideas and they are so unique. I like your style of writing as well. Did i mention i loke your story?? lol,
ElfieAuthor's Response: Thank you so very much. It's always weird to hear that your own ideas are unique because you live with them every single day. :) Report Review
Hey that was such a good chapter! Quite realistic considering the circumstances and quite fun. I love that end bit and nice middle name for Draco by the way! Im gonna go read the next chapter now so till my next review,
ElfieAuthor's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. Yes, Draco's name has a meaning and he will hear about it later. :) Report Review
Wow, so glad i read this on ff.net first. Imagine not having more to read!!! Wait a sec, i still need more to read! Arghe! WANT-THEM-TO-MAKE-UP-
Elfie (shena)Author's Response: Haha you're funny! XD Thanks for your review! Report Review
OMG! That was briliant, absolutely BRILIANT! I cant believe he gets bruises, but its very intruiging. I wonder whats gonna hapen next! Argh! Please update soon,
ElfieAuthor's Response: bruises. kinky, no? Report Review
I love, love, love this fic! Its the first real hermione/ron story ive liked. My only critisism is that there are a lot of gramatical errors. But if typos are the only fault, then your doing really well!
ElfieAuthor's Response: Yeah, I know. I've been getting that a lot. I'm going to go through them and fix it up, but I just don't have the time. I'll get around to it...I hope... Report Review
I like, i like! I laughed at the part where she gets all paradoid about who the stalker might be and thought it could even be an elf! LOL.
ElfieAuthor's Response: Yes, well elves are the likely suspect, no? *shakes head* No...Thanks! ^^ Report Review
Yay! How sweet that chapter was (2). This is such a good story so far!
ElfieAuthor's Response: Thanks! ^^ Report Review
That was a good chapter! I know what you mean though about not being happy with your own work. Im like that too but you've nothing to worry about, this fic is great (well im only up to chap 2 but it seems very promising)
ElfieAuthor's Response: Thanks! The last chapter that I've written I didn't like either, so I'm rewritting it. Thanks again! ^^ Report Review
Father? Oh, ho. Doesnt sound good. Poor Harry! Hope he makes it out alright without going through too much anxiety. What am i thinking? That'll never happen. Anyway, update soon please!
ElfieAuthor's Response: course it wont, weres the drama in that?! lol! Report Review
Excellent story, ill be coming back to it really soon! The idea of entering Harry's mind is unique and interesting.
ElfieAuthor's Response: thanks! i was quite fond of the idea! Report Review
So good. SO GOOD!!!! A bit of a wait but it was totally worth it. I loved that chapter, just doesnt get boring for a moment. And i love your sense of humour! Probably already said it but its true! Anyway, PLEASE update as soon as you possibly can cause i really really want to read more. REALLYAuthor's Response: Thank you! ^^ Yes, I will try to get the next chapter out sooner! Sorry! Report Review
Well im supposing Bella is going to get told on right? And possibly get expelled. It's a bt strange that she would try to kill a student when she knows the consequences but if it gets Sirius and Heather together then its kool with me! Update soon,
ElfieAuthor's Response: Haha, yeah well I thoughts Bella would be just insane enough to do something like that. I mean she did join Lord Voldemort after all! Lol. Thanks. Report Review
What does she want!!!! Quick!!!! Hey im glad you update this story regularly, yay!!!
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Geat vhapter, i finally finished reading it! Update soon please, i cantr wait for it. I hope Faye finally realises she's fallen for Sirius soon. I CANT WAIT!!!
Elf_princessAuthor's Response: Haha... Faye's very stubborn about that little point about falling for Sirius! XD Well, all I can say is... THERE'S GOING TO BE A SEQUEL, so I can't make everything happen all at once! Lol! Report Review
Hahaha! I love it i love it i love it!!!!
Elf_princessAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews! It really REALLY made my day!! Report Review
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