aw! i love it! especially the end, soo perfect!

Author's Response: thanx for reveiwing and i'm glad you liked it. dont you think it had a bit of a corning ending though lol
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Aha so she does like him! anyway, you have to update soon!!!! i like your story a lot and i want to see what happens!!

Author's Response: hmmmm, does she? the next two chapters are finished and soon to be uploaded.

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wow, thast a good chapter too. I love how JAmes sves snapes life, and then then ungrateful little git is just like, "I hate you". typical. anyway, i like the part in dumbledors office where all three of them are yelling at each other too.

Author's Response: thanks, I remembered how in the books (POA) it said that Snape wasn't exactly properly grateful to James, if you get what I jut said, I don't think I even do

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*gasp of horror* ack! i can't believe he told him that!!! now i MUST go see what happens!

Author's Response: you must!

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This chapter is really good too!!! i like you story so far!

Author's Response: thank you!

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muhahaha sirius gets blown off for once!!! i love it! sad for him tho, but hey, it has to happen sometime...

Author's Response: yeah, it does... to some more then others

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hahaha thats a great start!!! anyways, im off to read the rest now!

Author's Response: have fun

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aww, thats not fair! when do we get to see the letter?!! you must update soon!

Author's Response: will try!

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hahahah “ONE SHOULD NEVER LISTEN TO THE MURMURINGS OF THE MENTALLY DISTURBED!� thats great!! you need to have longer chapters, although shorter means you can update more often so i don't know.... Anyways, im hooked on your story now so i really really hope you update soon ok? please? *puppyeyes* anyways, about the box? boy box or girl? maybe like oliver,or frank, or caroline, or katie or something? i don't know what kind of name a box sholud have. pancakes yes, boxes no...whatever you come up with, UPDATE YOUR STORY SOON!!! <3 karen

Author's Response: yes, i will update as soon as i can...probably sometimes at the end of this week. i normally update faster, but things are hectic around here :). i will give oliver some thought...and hm....what would one name pancakes then? thanks for all the reveiws, again!

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there is nothing i hate about your story, i love the whole thing!!! it is funny and very sweet! " always thought I was a game, James, just another thing for you to win." that was probably my favorite line.

Author's Response: glad you like it! i liked writing that little insight into lilys mind.

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wow. i loved that whole chapter, i don't think i could pick a favorite line... very nice job. this is probably my favorite chapter so far :D

Author's Response: glad it was your favorite, i think it was my favorite to write so far too...although, chap. 1 came pretty close.

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hahaha i like the letter format. this chapter is good too. " the weed..." "the skies opened and the heavens sang..." lol. your story is very funny.

Author's Response: glad i made you laugh! it means a lot to me!

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another good chapter. my favorite line was: "p.s. will you go out with me?"

Author's Response: i liked that too---and it was somebody elses favorite as well...cool. thanks for allllll your reveiws...they made my day!

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lol that was hilarious!!! i love that her hair turned green! very funny. and i like fib-ettes too. very good prologue. im off to read the rest now.

Author's Response: wow, thanks! it has been forever since i got some reveiws!

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This is really good so far!! i don't have time to read the rest now, but i will sometime i promise!!!

Author's Response: Thankyou. I'm glad you think it is good

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This is really cool! Nice story!

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wow thats a really good start! i hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is already written so it'll be up soon! --Mickie

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Thats a great story so far! update soon!!!

Author's Response: thanks so much! i'll update as soon as i can, i promise. =D

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this is really good so far...

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OoOoh a good start!!!!!!

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oh wow that was good! i love all the emotion, especially when she askes if he would have killed her!!! very good!!!!!! i hope you update soon!!!!

Author's Response: thank you :D glad you liked it... ch2 is writing in progress.... i hope i can finish it soon...

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Thats really good so far! update soon!!!

Author's Response: I will, I'm actually almost done writing the next chapter.

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OoOh thats good so far... very intriguing...

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lol the letters were funny! it took me a minute to realize it was different people writing but it was funny once i got it! anyways thats a good story so far. Your preceptions of characters like petunia are refreshingly different from most stories. Keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked this chapter! Make sure to come back and read the rest of the story (chapter two on Monday the 20th).

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ha that was funny! especially the part where james came in. i thought he was really remus for a second there. was one of the chapters mixed up? i wasn't sure but it confused me for a second. the one with the quidich match and the one after? anyways cool story! keep up the good work and update soon!!

Author's Response: Yes it was.... sorry about that. I think I was bored while I was on here and was pressing arrows and didn't get it how it was before ... oh well its changed now:P

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