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Reading Reviews From Member: Fawkes_Everlasting

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Review #1, by Fawkes_Everlasting

Harry Potter and Godric's Revelation: Hermione's Odd Rescue

27th June 2006:

Interesting...how does he know about the Golden Gate Bridge?:) I like it so far. I noticed your style of writing is kind of like mine. i just dont know how to say it. But it is good. And now (finally) i get to the story. i like the dialouge. it moves at a nice pace...try adding some desriptive words to the story. it truly will help i promise. nice sense of seriousness and humor throughout the chapter. it balances out well. all in all a good story and a fine job on your part!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!! I'll take your advise into account!!!! It's really good!!

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Review #2, by Fawkes_Everlasting

What a Beautiful Day: What a Beautiful Day

16th December 2005:

an interesting piece! i rather enjoyed it! a few mispellings, but nothing against you for that. im horrible at spelling.

Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing :) glad you liked it!! yeah, i'm pretty terrible at spelling <.<

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Review #3, by Fawkes_Everlasting

The Girl That Changed Everything: The Girl Next Door

26th May 2005:

i love it so far!

Author's Response: thanks

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Review #4, by Fawkes_Everlasting

May Roses Bloom: May Roses Bloom

25th May 2005:

nice. short yet to the point and full of suspense! if you have time could you read mine? its only 1 chapter. your story is really good. plz write more!

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Review #5, by Fawkes_Everlasting

Lost Letters: Mysterious Letters

16th May 2005:

this story has a great plot and flow to it. nicely done. poor remus! id love to read more so keep udated please?? o and your style of wrting is awesome!

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