This is a great story you have going so far! I only got to read the first chapter because I'm short on time right now, but I like what I see! My only suggestion would be to put more spacing inbetween paragraphs, only to make it easier to read. Other than that, it's absolutely fantabulous! I especially loved the present from Remus, Moody, Tonks, and all of them- very thoughtful of them! I am looking very much forward to reading the rest of it. Keep up the good work!
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Wow. This is an amazing story so far, definately keep writing; I like where this is going. I'm very intrigued and can't wait to read more. Great job! Report Review
Very good so far! I spotted a few grammatical and spelling errors, but other than that it was a lovely story. Cute plot, and I can't wait to see how Harry proposes! Update soon, and thanks for reviewing my story! If you'd like, check out my other story, "And I See Your True Colors..." and review that one as well!
-ArualAuthor's Response: PLease remeber i will be editing my stories after they are finished so dont take my bad grammar and mistakes personally and please dont put them against me. i dont know if my stories are all that good, but i think they are at least worth reading so please give them a chance! thanx - Ms_Evans:) Report Review
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