I love what you've done with the characters so far! And this chapter was well written. Very intriguing, I can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :) Report Review
What a unique story line. Seriously, kudos to you! Off to read the rest, can't wait to see what happens. Great first chapter.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm pleased you liked it. :) I hope you enjoy the rest!
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I loved this story! At first I was a bit skeptical but it turned out to be a very interesting, lovely read. Keep writing and keep up the good work :) Report Review
Awh that was cute! Hopefully a real kiss happens soon :) Report Review
Lol Al was very enteraining in this chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Report Review
Weird (but very interesting concept)! I love it so far :D Good job! Report Review
I just wanted to say, once again, that you are an amazing writer! I loved this story, and I loved how it was canon. It is so hard to find GOOD post-DH stories that stay true to the story. So I applaud you for that! :) Report Review
Oh Rita Skeeter.
It was too good to be true!
Good chapter once again. Report Review
Again, great writing! I am intriqued, Rita Skeeter ... helping out ... this should be interesting! :) Report Review
Great first chapter! You are a great writer and although the first chapter doesn't give away much, can't wait to see what the rest of the story has to offer! Report Review
Very good read! I loved the emotions of the characters. Well done.Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for taking the time to leave a review, it's very much appreciated. :) Report Review
good chappter; glad you updated, cant wait to read more =)Author's Response: thanks a bunch! next update should be soon. Report Review
ahh Mrs Weasley is a bugger. Not letting Harry & Ginny have time alone. Pff. Lmao. Good chapter; can't wait to read more =)Author's Response: i know but i figured that if this really happened, Mrs. Weasley would do just that; be a bugger. thanks so much, happy you liked it! Report Review
I would NOT want to be Remus at the moment if James and Sirius walked in ... :S Good chapter, tho. Very interesting.Author's Response: Woo hoo. First review on this chapter. I was so worried how this chapter would be recieved. Thank you! I wouldn't want to be Remus either...bad Remus. Lol...I love tension. Thanks for reading and reviewing sooo soon! You are awesome. Report Review
Ooh, good chapter. I really liked the end; I can't wait to read more. Report Review
Oh haha, I had to read the last paragraph like 5 times to get it; I didn't see the "Follower of the Dark Lord" part. LOL. Good story though; though it creeps me out to think Ron would have gone over to the other side. But good job.Author's Response: It creeps me out too, if it happened in canon I think I would die *see me in near future eagerly reading the seventh book and then collapsing* Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a kind review! Report Review
yaay quick update. But NOOOOOOOOO I dont want this story to end; its soo good. And the last part made me cry; and the whole chapter just made me laugh our loud. My mom was getting annoyed with me. Haha. Keep up the good work and contnue writing ... beatuifully. Noo I dont want to read the epilogue .... that means the story is finished *runs out the door crying*Author's Response: I know! I got excited and started to write and i couldn't stop so I decided to post earlier than I thought I would. I'm sad the stories going to end soon... I loved writing it so much. It made you cry? lol Sorry! Yeah, I wanted it to be funny because that's how most of my chapters are, even when sometimes horrible is going to happen, I like to add in a bit of humor. I'm sorry but it has to end soon! *sobs and pounds head on desk* Report Review
Harry is ... weird. LOL. Always dying, or at least trying to :P haha. Great chapter though, I wonder what Dumbledore's got up his sleeve *thinks*. lolAuthor's Response: yeah, i'm a bit into the death thing, sorry. it might be a little nagging but oh well. lol thank you! and you'll see. Report Review
oh yeah, Ron and Hermione too .... lol. I forgot about them. I've been reading the other reviews and yes this is a fanfic, and you're doing a totally great job and everything, I think its just people are skepitcal about the Daily Prophet knowing what the Horcruxes are too, like as Dumbledore said, a fair few people know what they are and all because no books whatsoever tell what the exact Definition of a Horcurx is.Author's Response: I'm actually laughing. Not at u, at ur question. Cuz seriously last night I removed an authors note that explained that whole fiasco. Funny. I thought people had stopped starting to read my story and I only had the people who'd read the whole thing. lol.
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I like it, but how does the whole wizarding world know about Horcruxes? I thought only Voldemort, Dumbledore, Harry and R.AB. knew about LV's horcruxes ... ? And wow, the Weasley's are being jerks .. Report Review
Yaay, an update. Dont worry about school, I start high school this year too *boo* But I dont start until tuesday, so thats good. Great chapter, made me laugh. Though I did notice this: Sirius had a large purple handkerchief in his hand and he blew his nose, passing it off to Sirius. LoL. I hardly doubt Sirius could pass a handkerchief to himself. LoL. Otherwise, GRRREAT CHAPTER. Woo. Update soon :DAuthor's Response: lol yay updates! lol thanks for the review! I'm happy you liked it! I'll fix that mistake ! Thanks a lot! I'm happy you liked it! Thanks a bunch! I'll update as soon as possible! Report Review
Loved it; each letter made me cry. :P OKay, so now I've read 3 of ur stories ... all were great. I loved this one; and lets just say, if a story can make me laugh, cry and smile all at once, they're [the author] is a damn good writer :P lolz, keep up the good work :PAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! Yay, i'm happy that you've read three of my stories! I appreciate the good writer comment, thanks so much for reading this story and for reviewing! I'm so happy you liked it. Report Review
I love your stories :P Well, I've only read 2, but I love them. You are so good a writing the Marauders and Lily .. and this story is so .... err ... cute?? I'm not really sure if I can say that about Sirius writing a letter to James ... lolz. It's a pity that both of them are dead, that would be hallarious to read them like at 40 yrs old and still playing pranks on people. LOL :P Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! Sure you can call it cute! I think Sirius is cute to write a letter to James! Glad you liked it, I love writing the marauders and lily, so it's good to hear that you think i'm good at it! Thanks for reading my stuff and reviewing, know that I appreciate it and love you for it! Report Review
OMG. OMG. Such a huge cliify. I love this story, it is so hallarious. And Remus and Lily (:O) Wow. LoL. Please update soon ^_^Author's Response: Glad you love it! Thanks for reviewing, i appreciate it! Report Review
OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. *lol* Sorry, could do that forever. But Harry ... DEAD. OMG OMG OMG. Is he really dead?? Is he alive?? TELL ME!!!!!!! lol. Very good chapter, made me cry and I thought that this: "House elves were proudly standing in the front lines wearing as many clothes as they possibly could. A few vampires stood recklessly to the side, although they looked close to biting Mad-Eye who was keeping a close eye out." was hallaious. 'Specially the House Elves part. Saw a couple of grammar mistakes but oh well, they were small. UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!! OMG OMG OMG *lol*
Author's Response: lol thats okay. You'll have to wait to find out what happens. sorry!! it made you cry? wow. lol and im happy it made you laugh as well! i always like to have that in every one of my chapters. i need to still edit this chapter for grammar and stuff but thank you!! i'll update soon as I can! thanks a bunch for your review! Report Review
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