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Review #1, by LG655Dizzy: Dizzy

1st September 2014:
Hello Hello Hello!

Fellow Hufflepuff ;)

Well, I have just got to say, that this has got to be one of the cutest things I ever read. I actually thought that this one-shot would be about her telling him she was pregnant, but no, total twist. I loved it anyways. I also loved the Dolores Umbridge doll, I might've laughed a little too hard at that.

And then, their little scene, adorable. Oh my sweetness. You captured the essence of their relationship in a indefinitely short and simple way, and I loved it! (:

Can't wait to read more from you!
xox,
Jessica

Author's Response: Jessica!

Thanks for the surprise review! I loved it. Your kind words mean so much! :)

-Leigh


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Review #2, by LG655Small Bump: Chapter One

1st February 2014:
Oh. My. Goodness.
That was so touching. I even shed a couple tears. I knew it was coming, but it still gets me every time.
I liked how you had Ron talk to the "small bump". That was cute. I also liked how you incorporated some of the lyrics into his speech. I noticed. ;)
Are you up for constructive criticism? I think, maybe you should've added a bit more description, to Ron's speech, or to when Hermione woke up?
But, other than that, I loved it! (:

xox,
LG

Author's Response: Hi!

Ah, I'm so glad you liked it!

Yes! I was thinking the exact same thing! I've been wondering whether or not I should add more to the story, more to the details of his dreams and more details about the child and his feelings.
I should add more to Hermione... hmm. I'll add more and post it this month!

Thank you so much for your review!

Hugs
- Lostmyheart


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Review #3, by LG655In Love With Your Laugh: In Love With Your Laugh

9th January 2014:
Haiii!
Okai, so I loved this! Especially the way James proposed. (': I might've shed a couple tears. The ending was perfection. Just the one sentence of "I Finally have a sister" ties the knot. Rose was exactly as she should be written, her persona spot on. The Wotter household was also spot on, and I really liked how you wrote Fleur. As for things I would change? Well..., I don't really have any! This was amazing, and I'm actually extremely surprised you didn't win! Or at least get 2nd or 3rd place? Well, honestly, this story deserves a 10/10, not even! More like a BMS.

xox,
LG

Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks little sis.

xoxo LL


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Review #4, by LG655Too Good To Be True: Couldn't Possibly Be

9th January 2014:
Oh my- Oh my- It's all I can say. I- I'm speechless. This was amazing! It moved me so much, I was crying! I still am! This story, made the reader feel so connected, to Sirius, and to Marlene, that it was almost inevitable that they would not feel at least a ping of compassion for Marlene and Sirius. I would never be Marlene Black, was the one line that got me. How could a story that started out with such a happy beginning end so, so tragically? I just- This is phenomenal. You are truly talented.

xox,
LG

Author's Response: Aw, thanks hun! I'm glad u felt connected, the last thing I want to do is make the characters seem unnatural! Thank u thank u thank u! ALL THE PRAISE! THANK U! :D

Oh my god! The first time anyone's ever said that to me! But, my stories aren't usually like this, this one somehow worked out! :)

Thank u for the lovely lovely review!


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Review #5, by LG655The Heir Accedes: The Heir Accedes

9th January 2014:
Review Tag!

Woah, I'm speechless. I really liked this! Especially the suspense. You had the reader sitting in anticipation, as you explained Tom's wanting and dedication to opening the Chamber. And then the ending. Two sentences, and it was a great way to end it. I'm surprised you only got 3rd place! You didn't just end it like most, where he enters the chamber and yadda yadda, useless info. You ended it with the line that, shapes the story, in a way. I wished there was a continuation to this! (:

xox,
LG

Author's Response: Hello!

Wow, thank you very much! I'm really glad I managed to make this suspenseful and tense, because I think that's the way Tom would have felt as he got closer to opening the Chamber, as well as strangely excited - but then, he's Tom Riddle! It was quite fun in a way to get into his head. I'm pleased you liked the ending too! I always try to end in a powerful place, so I'm glad it worked here.

Ah, that's really too kind! If you have time I'd definitely recommend checking out the stories that won first and second in this challenge because they're amazing and a great read :)

Thanks again for the great review!


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