That story was incredible. Very well written, and very deep and heartfelt. A great glimpse into a small part of the world JK Rowling created.

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That was written really well, and it was so powerful! I loved it!

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That was written beautifully. You captured the emotions of the characters very well, especially Hermione. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Very sad, but I suppose that was the point. You did a great job!

Author's Response: thankyou so much! Yeah it was supposed to be angsty and sad; I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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That was beautiful, very well written. It captured Harry's emotions brilliantly. I love how you tied James and Lily with Harry and Ginny, and the little saying on the Snitch was cute. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the parallels!

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Wow...that was beautiful. You captured Harry's emotions so well, and your descriptions were so powerful, especially your description of the picture Harry was looking at. Great job!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading my story. Thanks so much for the great review.

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The was incredible. Well written, great dialogue and description. The poem at the end was also very good, really added to the story. Great job!

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Awww...what a sweet ending. The perfect, romantic close to the story. You did an incredible writing job throughout the story, and you ended it just as well as you started. Great job!

Author's Response: =))) Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your reviews.

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Love the last sentence, very poetic and appropriate. Great chapter, not much else to be said.

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Awww...I've got to be honest, I didn't really like the business-like Hermione dealing w/ Terry, but I can see how it was necessary. Oh well, at least things seem to be going in the direction I hoped for from the beginning!

Author's Response: I appreciate the honesty. =) I don't think she had any more energy in her at this point to argue, you know? But I can see where you're coming from. Thanks!

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That was perfect. Ron was such a gentleman, I'm glad he stopped things before they did something he knew Hermione might regret or her heart wasn't fully in. Of course, I know they're meant to be together, so it has to happen eventually. You also did very well with Hermione's character, she was so vulnerable and really just wanted to feel happy and safe for a minute. Incredible job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the way I handled that, it's been received with mixed emotions. Thanks again.

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Incredible. That about sums it up. The way you had Hermione wait before she completely lost her head...brilliant. Just when it seems this story is at its best, you go and make it better. Amazing job!

Author's Response: Oooh, thank you so much. I really appreciate that.

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Wow...now that's the kind of drama I was hoping for! You definitely delivered, I don't even know what to say except great job w/ this chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it's what you were looking for. =)

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First, Hermione is getting in way over her head...this can't be good. Second, I can't wait for Harry's party, it should be quite exciting. I'm hoping for some drama! Love the story so far!

Author's Response: She really is getting in over her head, and it's only going to get worse before it gets better. =X

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Finally Hermione really gets a clue! About time! Great chapter...now on to the next!

Author's Response: Finally indeed. =D Thanks!

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Ah! I loved the fight between Ron and Terry, very dramatic. Harry and Ginny are so cute! Can't wait to keep reading!

Author's Response: Thanks! =) Cute is always good.

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Ah! Great chapter...I got so nervous when Hermione and Ginny were talking about Ron but Ginny didn't know it. I do hope, though, that we are going to find out more about what happened w/ Ron and Hermione before? I guess I'll just have to keep reading and find out!

Author's Response: I promise, you get it all sorted out later on, so you will have to keep reading. ;) Thanks so much!

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I'd just like to say you are very talented at writing dialogue, I know with my own writing it can get kind of tricky and long-winded, but you do a great job. Keep up the great work...and I'm on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you. Practice, my friend, and also getting second opinions from betas and friends helps. =) I appreciate that, thanks.

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Good job! You did really well keeping the characters true to canon, and its also very well written. I always think Ron deserves more credit than he's given...I loved it!

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Wow...definitely didn't see that comingthe first time around. Although, when I look back after reading the end, I do see some hints you threw in. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the kind review. I'm glad you picked up on them, even if it was the second time around.

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Great start...can't wait to see what happens next. I really enjoyed reading the light, witty banter between Ron and Hermione, it was a perfect mask to what was really going on under the surface. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Let me know what you think of the rest. =)

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Very sweet, the emotion was all there...but it could have had a little more. Maybe some backstory on how she died, where Harry was, something along those lines. Other than that, it was a very sweet little fanfic.

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Great chapter...its nice to have a little down time from the action and get into some of the characters' heads. I love the relationship Ron and McGonagall seem to be forming, its really sweet. I can't wait to see what happens with the trio once Ron goes in the hospital wing, keep up the great work!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! It's strange that you mention the 'down time' as I was just thinking that both the characters and myself need a rest! You can look forward to a couple of calmer chapters where our friends can spend a little more time with each other.

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Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next...I hope nothing too horrible happens. Anyway...keep up the great work!

Author's Response: We'll have to wait and see! I've always said that if we aren't afraid about losing our favourite characters, then we can't be excited when they're put at risk.

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Great chapter...it was nice to see the contrast between the two relationships. That was some very emotional writing for Draco's part...I loved it! Just some small, nit-picky things: watch the tenses, every once in awhile you jump around with past and present, but its nothing major; and don't forget to revise, there are some words left out and some typos, but don't worry, they aren't anything that really detracts from the story...its just me being an annoying perfectionist. Apart from that the story is brilliant, and I honestly would love to see some more Draco/Ginny before you get to Harry, because although Draco is evil, he loves her, and you could definitely do some interesting stuff w/ a relationship like that. Not all relationships have to be roses and puppies. Anywho, can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks! That was something that I was really aiming for. Opps! Sorry about the mistakes. That is totally 100 % my fault, I quit having a beta read this FOREVER ago. I will be more careful of that next time. I think more Ginny and Draco would be a good idea, I just haven't really decied on what to do yet. Thanks so much for your contructive criticsism and your review!!!

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