extremely well-written! looking forward to future chapters

Author's Response: There will be plenty of chapters to this one! Thanks for stopping by!

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i would love a Lily & Stephen story :)

Author's Response: great! thank you for reviewing!
Dilys :)

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i feel like this has a lot of potential-- update soon, i'll be waiting for chapter two :)

Author's Response: thanx and I will!

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ahhh

as you said, it's very short... but wow! aw poor sirius. and corrie... and dani

it's just all one big mess lol

can't WAIT for chapter 19 :D

10/10
♥jtsoccer

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xoxoBeth

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i spent the entire afternoon reading through this story. i am so very sorry for not reviewing every chapter, because they CERTAINLY deserve reviews.

you are a very talented writer, and i look forward to reading more stories from you :)

10/10
jtsoccer

Author's Response: i look forward to hearing from you then! i thankyou muchly!

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hm so i LOVE this story so far! it has a different feel to it [probably since the narrator is a sarcastic teenaged girl- VERY different from the norm:)], and i can't wait to read the rest of it!

Author's Response: yes. do read the rest then!!

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YAY

so good. omg.

update soon, please?

10/10
jtsoccer

Author's Response: Yes, I will =D

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AN UPDATE!

it was fantastic :) i think your writing is getting better as the story progresses (I'm not saying it was bad at the beginning; more like, you've grown as a writer since then)

update soon, please!!!

10/10
jtsoccer

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This was very well-written, and I enjoyed reading it :) I'm about to go see if you have other stories now


jtsoccer

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I hope you like my other things also :)

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yay!!!

i dont really know what else to say but. yes.

10/10

UPDATE SOON!

♥jtsoccer

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xoxoBeth

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AH

so um. 10/10. update soon.

PLEASE.

:D:D:D

♥jtsoccer

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!
xoxoBeth

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aw.

i really like the idea of a series of one-shots; i feel like it will work better than a sequel would have

can't wait til next chapter!!!
♥jtsoccer

Author's Response: thanks! yes I think it will!

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ahh update! yayy :)

i liked this chapter... a bit short, but a good ending to it haha. i can't wait for the next chapter... update soon!

♥jtsoccer

Author's Response: Thank you!

~LB

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yayy!! new chapter :)

it was great, as per usual

update sooon!

jtsoccer

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!
xoxoBeth

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i LOVE this story!! sorry for not reviewing the other chapters...

But really, I like this a lot :) I'm looking forward to the next two chapters!

Author's Response: There's no need to apologize for not reviewing jtsoccer (anyone with soccer in their pen name is A.O.K. with me). Just knowing that you are reading and thoroughly enjoying is more than enough for me!

Thanks!

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this was such a depressing chapter, but SUCH a good end!! you are such a talented author and i will most definitely be putting you on my favorite authors list once i navigate away from this page!

but really. this chapter was perfect. KATIE BELL! it al ties in! really good...

and i loved the ending to this. really. i am so very sorry for not reviewing every chapter, because you certainly deserve it... I really, really enjoyed this story. Thank you for it.

jtsoccer

(i dont think i even need to say 10/10)

Author's Response: aw its okay you didnt review every chapter, its the thought that counts. haha. but yeah, thank you so much! im glad you liked the ending, im glad you liked it as a whole, and i am honored that i will be on your favorite authors list.

thank you so much.

and your welcome! it was my pleasure. XD

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haha i really enjoyed this first chapter; i hope you update soon!! i have high hopes for this story :)

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!
xoxoBeth

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i enjoyed it a lot :) poor george though :(

i've been trying to get myself to write a post DH story, just a little one shot, but i haven't quite been able to do it... fred and dobby's deaths hit me pretty hard

anyways, 10/10!

Author's Response:
Same here. Long live Fred and Dobby! lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it! That means so much to me!

-Carrie

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i am SO SO sorry i haven't reviewed in AGESS but i just got caught up on this story, and i must say i love it :) please please please find a computer to update!! that cliffhanger is evil...

but yeah. very sad chapter... i guess it's good that jamie and sirius are at least talking to each other, judging by the next chapter (unless lily or regulus or someone showed him rory, but i highly doubt that)

anyways, GREAT!! update son :)

Author's Response: it's ok. thanks!

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you didn't like this?!

i loved it!!

keep up the great work... update soon!

Author's Response: haha thank you :)

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you should consider writing a few more chapters for this story
10/10

Author's Response: Yeah, a few people have been asking me to write more and I'm concidering turning it into a proper story, thanks a lot for the review :D

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i like it so farrr, i can't wait to see where it's going :)

Author's Response: this was only the first chapter and there is more to come cause I'm writing the fourth chapter at the moment! I will post more soon and I'm glad you liked the first chapter even though it was quite short :)

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aw i like it... it's a cute story :)

update soon!

Author's Response: I will! Keep in mind, Part Two, now entitled "Real" will be up as a separate story. Thanks for reviewing!

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ah i love it :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

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love it so far-- update soon!

Author's Response: I'll try. thanks!

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