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Review #1, by AnnLillyPotter Moments of Love: The Princess Is Born - Part 2

8th October 2013:
Not a 10 because of minor grammar mistakes... I know some people don't mind but to me "they're" is not the same as "their"...
Nevertheless, I loved it. You can really paint a picture with words; some passages were very poetic. I really did love your words and the plot was really good.
I would have liked more on how she broke the news and the reactions of family.
Thank you for an amazing story.
Marķa from Argentina.

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