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Review #1, by obviously_disgruntledWhen the Past Learns From Us: Chapter One: First Encounters

5th October 2013:
Awsome first chapter! I admire the way you put a lot more effort in the story than in the comic relief... Sadly, most fanfics out there focalize on the comedy aspect and less on their plot. I also loved how you nailed the main characters' personnality perfectly (well, the way I portray it in my head anyway)!
Please keep writing- will definetly check your other stories later!

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Review #2, by obviously_disgruntledIn The Rain: In The Rain

20th September 2013:
Wow.
I wasn't expecting this to be a Harry/Hermione fic. But hey, just as loong as it's well written, I'll read anything to the end :)
Good job,
~~obviously_disgruntled

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Review #3, by obviously_disgruntledDid you think I would crawl?: The first chapter, and the last

20th September 2013:
Hello there!
I really liked your One-shot! It wasn't the best one I've ever read, but hey, for an aspiring author like myself, only reading excellent fics get's depressing after a while!
Anyway.
I see that you too are affected by the 1000-word-chapter syndrome! Warms my heart knowing I'm not alone ;)
I liked how you kept the reader on edge- not letting them know WHO the story was about until half way through. I also enjoyed the twist at the end 'who was I kidding, I would never be over him'.
Overall, nice job and don't give up on fanfiction because some people out there are too lazy to write reviews: practice makes perfect!
~~obviously_disgruntled

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