Reading Reviews From Member: Dear Dobby
  
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Review #1, by Dear DobbyUnexpected Parenthood: Chapter Twenty-Six

23rd November 2013:
I love reading from Al's POV but I'm not gonna lie, I hated this chapter. It makes me hate both Hattie (well, even more than I already did) and Al. Yeah, it sucks that the love of his life broke up with him, but he's totally using Hattie. Even though she's completely awful, she doesn't deserve that.

Author's Response: Hi,

I love writing Al's POV it's fun and it gives it a totally different persepctive the story. Al not's using Hattie, he does care for her but he doesn't love her like he loves Flick. And yes although Hattie is awful she didn't deserve it.

Thanks for R+R'ing!

-Potterfan310


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Review #2, by Dear DobbyIgnite: Embers

11th November 2013:
I've read a lot of fanfic, but I haven't seen anything like this. Your story actually felt like a Harry Potter book. It's definitely my favorite. Awesome job!

Author's Response: I think Ignite would make a terrible young adult book, but I'm glad I'm keeping the spirit of the Potterverse intact! Thank you for enjoying, and thanks for reviewing.

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Review #3, by Dear DobbyFaking It: Happy New Years!

2nd November 2013:
So I really like your story, but you need to change the status back to wip. It's totally not finished. I always search for completed stories so I can read the whole thing and it's really disappointing to get to the end and have it not be done.

Author's Response: It's going to be completed soon. (:

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Review #4, by Dear DobbyConfronting Temptation: Running

23rd September 2013:
I read your first book and now I've been reading this one. I'm relatively new to the site, so this is actually the first review I've left. I have to tell you I love your writing. It's so addictive. I actually just found your first story a few days ago. I feel really sorry for Rex. It's so hard to accept that someone is never going to love you back. I'm so excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Well thank you, this site becomes real addictive, real fast. If you like my style you should also check out my other scor/rose story that isn't related to the Temptation stories. Also if you are looking for some other good stories let me know, I know some that are crazy addictive on this site. Yeah Rex is going to have a hard time realizing that but he will have to eventually.
Thank you so much for the review, glad to be the first.


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