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Review #1, by nininoraWhere's the Romance? Year 1: Halloween Night. Part Two. Year 1: Chapter 6

15th October 2014:
Wow, this is a great story! You should really write some more-I want to know what happens with Harry and Kathleen :)

As a pointer though, I think you should do a spell check before posting, and maybe you can say what Kathleen looks like? All we know is that she has long hair, and it's easier for the reader to picture the story if they know what the characters look like :)

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Review #2, by nininoraAn Even Match: 31.

25th October 2013:
Great story-I'm addicted!
But I think you meant that Lavender had taken Ron to Madame Puddifoot's-not Pansy

Author's Response: Haha OH that's what sarah was talking about;) Thank you! There are so many things that as a writer you don't catch because it's corrected itself in your head...

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