{reviewid: 1197037, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
15th November 2006:
it's an interesting idea,the whole muggles going to hogwarts thing. ive heard of it in a few other stories, and im kinda glad u didn't have them there to 'save the wizarding world' and all of that. on the other hand, the characters are very...hyper, and it gets kinda annoying. maybe it would help if u had given the girls all different personalities. because right now, it's somewhat hard to understand who's who. but i think u did okay for the first chap.
Author's Response: I catch your drift, but there is only three chapters so far. I think the characters develop as the story goes on, people will become more outgoing/softspoken and such. Stick with me please and keep commenting!
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{reviewid: 839277, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
3rd January 2006:
hey, when are you gonna update? i really like this story. i think you should continue it. ~x
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so sorry! i'm going to re-vamp it, I didn't like the way I started it. Wait for me, now!
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{reviewid: 812216, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
15th December 2005:
wow, this was good! i liked it a lot. a piece of advice, though, u should put a space between paragraphs, that way its easier to read. but i really liked this chapter, even if it was really long. and thanks for the review! i really apreciate it. update soon! ~x
Author's Response: I'll seriously consider doing that. Thanks for the advice!
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{reviewid: 780771, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
23rd November 2005:
this is a really good start. it was really mysterious and i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you seen it. Chapter 2 is in limbo, and it's gonna be quite long, so watch out for it!
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{reviewid: 677255, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
1st September 2005:
what?! this is getting confusing
Author's Response: ::blush:: sowwy if its confusing to you.
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{reviewid: 645023, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
13th August 2005:
the ending wasnt as good as the begining. but it was ok. over all good.
Author's Response: yah i know but the chapter was getting kind of long, so i had to leave off some where *shrugs* : )
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{reviewid: 625906, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
3rd August 2005:
awsome chapter...yay! i think i used a new word! update soon! (do i really need to say that every time?)
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{reviewid: 624174, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
2nd August 2005:
another GREAT chapter! how do u update so fast? usually amazing stories like this one takes months to update. and talking about updates, update soon!
Author's Response: I write one chapter a night. Usually around midnight becuz thats when I get home lol. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 623480, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
1st August 2005:
great chapter! update soon plz!
Author's Response: Just did! Thanks for reading
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{reviewid: 620597, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
31st July 2005:
omg! ...u should know wut imma say so i wont even say it. update soon plz!
Author's Response: lol aw ur sweet thanks.
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{reviewid: 619084, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
30th July 2005:
the bonding!lol, good chapter. this is a really good story. plz update soon!
Author's Response: lol, yes they're bonding. lol. everyone seems to be loving this. lol. i'll update asap. much love! ;) ~nomikkin
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{reviewid: 618110, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
29th July 2005:
very good start. on to the next chap!
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{reviewid: 618086, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
29th July 2005:
omg! not fred and george: thats just plain evil! but great start! update soon plz!
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{reviewid: 612647, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
27th July 2005:
oooooo! i like where this is going...oh no! thats the last chap! awww.. update soon plz! this is an awsome story!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much!
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{reviewid: 612614, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
27th July 2005:
awww! poor mrs.weasley! oh well, awesome chapter! i know i say that in like every review. sry.
Author's Response: lol its ok! I LOVE reviews
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{reviewid: 612572, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
27th July 2005:
oooooo! harry's a seer! or...something...ah! great chapter! as always!
Author's Response: hehe thank u!
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{reviewid: 612550, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
27th July 2005:
such a good chapter! before i go on to the next one, i have a favor to ask u. can u read and review my story plz? its called samara trinity:creature of the night. u dont have to, but it would be very much apreciated.
Author's Response: If I get a chance, but I dont have much time in between writing and editing my own. Sorry if I dont get a chance,
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{reviewid: 612500, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
27th July 2005:
awwww! so sad! ah oh wellz. good chapter! great chapter actually!
Author's Response: <3 thank u
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{reviewid: 612482, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
27th July 2005:
oh god no! plz not harry! lol, i thought that would be a possibility to. harry being the last horcrux. one thing, how did they know about the horcrux? i thought only dumbledore and harry knew...
Author's Response: No, in HBP it was never said that only certain wizards knew about Horcrux, only that it happens when a soul is torn. Its not taught in school but that doesnt mean older wiser wizards dont know wut it is.
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{reviewid: 612369, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
27th July 2005:
ahhaha.great chap!
Author's Response: thank u!
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{reviewid: 612358, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
27th July 2005:
great chapter.on to the next one!
Author's Response: Aw thanks! Ur sweet.
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{reviewid: 610448, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
26th July 2005:
wow, this was really good. defenately going into the favorites. plz update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I have submitted the next eight chapters but validation is very very slow at the moment. Please keep checking for updates!
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{reviewid: 607918, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
24th July 2005:
ugh, cliffhanger! pretty good. i think it could have been written a little better but overall it was good. update soon!
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{reviewid: 605100, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
23rd July 2005:
good job. a piece of advise, take a little longer while writing ur chapters. try and go back when u finish and add some things. if u want to.
Author's Response: Good idea. Like my chapter said, don't write out a story when you are tired unless you want it to be crappy.
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{reviewid: 605090, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
23rd July 2005:
not one of my favorite song fics, but it was good.
Author's Response: Well, I didn't think it would be, considering it was my first one.
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