I really hope that you will continue this story. You have some very strong emotions here, and I think you express them so lively in the story. Very beatiful, creative language, I would say keep going :) Don't get upset for a lack of reviews. I tend to abandon my stories when it feels like no-one is even reading them, but believe me, you are talented and I'm quite sure that more people will think so too when they get around to read this.
Anyways, happy writing :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you're right about more readers lol. But I do think that I will continue on with it.
Thank you again for reading!
-HR Report Review
Action is not your best writing? And I'm starting to wonder if there's anything that you can't write, my dear. Really good chapter again. The action part was over pretty quickly, maybe you could use your wonderful descriptive writing in those too a bit more? The way you describe Draco's and Hermione's relationship is fantastic, actually you're fantastic! Keep going :)Author's Response: No, action isn't my best (though even I must say it's a lot better than my pathetic attempts at fluff), and there was probably more I could of done with this chapter. Eventually, I will get around to reworking this story, and the action will be something I focus on.
Thank you so much for leaving a review, thank you for even reading. I'm so glad you're enjoying my work. Report Review
Very nice story. You captured Margaret's emotions very well. I hope you keep up with this story.Author's Response: thanks very much! the next chapter is coming! xo-vee! Report Review
Oh, how I would like to learn to write like that! I think you are very talented. I love your rich language and descriptions. All backround details fit into the story really well and make it even more interesting. Anyway, I hope you keep going :) Report Review
It's really nice how you make Ginny so sensitive and that she doesn't trust Malfoy yet. It makes their relationship seem more realistical than in many other Ginny/Malfoy fics that I've read. And there's some real drama in your story (I love drama! More please...). Well, anyway, I hope you will continue this story soon.
:)Author's Response: There will be a lot more drama and romance as well. I think it should take some time for Ginny to trust Malfoy seeing as he has kidnapped her, but I won't drag it out. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
This is a really good story. I like your writing style very much, it's quite sensitive and your language is beatiful. Keep going :)Author's Response: Thank you again for the reveiw! I hope that you like the next chapter. Please keep reading and reviewing. Report Review
This is a really good story. I like your writing style very much, it's quite sensitive and your language is beatiful. Keep going :)Author's Response: Oh!!!! *blushes* Thank you. Though I'm trying to expand my vocab. so there's always a dictionary on hand, and a thesuras (sp.? lol!) Hehehe.... yeah, also the pics. are really the basis for the chapters. I work on imagry and inspiration, lol. I'm glad that you like it, and that you're reviewing! It's great! I hope you like it. Hopefully it gets better and not so slow, *grumbles a litttle* :P! Anyhow, please, keep reading and reviewing! It's refreshing! Thanks again for the review, I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Report Review
I kiked this chapter very much. It's cute, emotional and well written :)Author's Response: Yay! Thanks Report Review
Nice to see that you have updated. Very cute chapter. Report Review
Poor Harry! Sad, but very good story. Report Review
Nice, new idea. I haven't read about Bowtruckles before in here :)Author's Response: It wasn't my idea. It was Entropy's. :) Report Review
Nice chapter, keep going :) Report Review
Well written and cute :)Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
This one's really good too.Author's Response: Thank you much. Report Review
I don't think it was that bad, the plot was quite predictable, but the story in itself is very nice.Author's Response: Thank you Kaisla. I am glad at least someone here on hpff appreciated it! Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Wow, I'm glad I finally found some time to start reading your other stories too. This is magnificent, captivating... Author's Response: Thanks so much Kaisla!!! Report Review
I liked especially about the flashback, nice, describing language.Author's Response: thank you Report Review
Nice and fun story, kind of cute.Author's Response: aw shucks, thanks. It's my first fic, and i was nervous how people would respond to it Report Review
Very interesting story. Keep going.Author's Response: Thanks! The last two chapters are already posted! Report Review
Very nice and fun. Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Quite good. Very sad and touching...Author's Response: i found this so sad while writing it. I was depressed at the time and this helped me let it out a bit
Update, please... Report Review
Heh, that was funny!Author's Response: Heh, thank you, my loyal reader. Report Review
This is quite good. What is Ron's worst memory, are you going to tell it in the next chapter?Author's Response: Oh thanks!!! My first review for my new story!!! Congrats!!! Yea I will tell you in the next chapter... Im working on it at the moment on every night. It should be out ina couple of days but then you've got to wait for the story to become valid! And Thats took a while until this story came out!!! Well Thanks again for reviewing!!! Opps *blushes* I think my review is a bit long? Oh well Report Review
You have a talent to write! This story really captured my mind and I couldn't stop reading!!! Please update soon.Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot. i try my best. And I promise you that I'll have the next chapter up as soon as possible Report Review
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